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for Naruto Shippuuden: The Hitch Arc

by HiroAyami

person Sean
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i feel so guilty i'm sorry i've been reading and not reviewing. sorry i got mmy own tthing now so time is scarce. I love your story. N/H is mmy favorite pairing and i love the story. THe idea of shika being hitch is great. and i always hope storys where Naruto walks in on Hinata. I find it funny and sexy. Alright keep it up it is so good.
~Dim Song
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. i hav 1 question is hinata now going to be normal around him?
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good continuation. Just please update soon :)
person Tenithus
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
..... I-I.... That was the most blunt Naruto I've ever seen, yet I would imagine that to happen in the anime. Great chapter comrade.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter so he goes to her room and finds her playing and thinking of him. Now that was a good way to get him to fall flat on his face hope you update soon, and keep up the great writings please
person Tleilaxu
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good good I like how its going, slightly longer chapters and better update speed definetly appriciated. LOL

Good job.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crazy chapter. I agree whole heartedly on that hidden code of girls. I know how you feel with the little sister thing. I got two of em as well and they are annoying when it comes to my relationships with others. Anyway, I was expecting someone to over hear them talking, only I thought it would be at Ichiraku's ramen instead of his place. Great style of writing and there is a lot of character development on Naruto's part in that chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope it's up soon.

Farezzz
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. And if the girls are all friends they will tell the other the good and sometimes bad. Not all will say about a break up unless they know that person was no good.
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story i can't wait for the next chapter
person Tenithus
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you comrade, you have spoiled the mood of me writing how Hinata finds out in my story. Very good hapter thou, keep up the work comrade.