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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Just try to include some really DETAILED sex scenes later on LOL. Anyways its really good keep it up! I LOL at Naruto and Shika's predicament. Well done there with their plot being discovered.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you do not update... I will end your life. Expect 7.62 rounds through your window, comrade.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice plot you got. update soon pls.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This story is awesome. I simply can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. this is a lil interesting. I hope to see more of your writings up soon. So Shikamaru is Hitch and Naruto needs help in getting Hinata to listen to him so he can tell her that she is very beautiful. I am glad to see you answered my question. I wanna know this is after the time skip so they are 15-16 and now he wants to see Hinata as she is
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job again. *puts on unhappy face* but you chapters are too short...... other then that great story so far and i will look forward to the next chapter.
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease finish this. So many good Hinata/Naruto fics never get finished. ; ;
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehe, great start. I am a fan of the Naruto/Hinata pairing. As a fan of the show and manga(watched all 223 episodes so far) i can honestly say that if they do not end up together in the series it will spell death for the writers....... I enjoyed the intro and will look forward to the next chapter. please update soon.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really cute! I hope you update soon.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well so far so good. When Naruto was mere inches from her face what did you mean after that. It kinda confused me to no end. I like how he just stood there staring at a naked Hinata. Just like any guy would if they didn't mean to walk in on someone that was a friend. And now he is outside sleeping and Hinata wishes he would of done something to her hmmmmm. Sounds like a lil trouble is in their paradise