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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!!! Got into Naruto a little late. Started watching the series just this year. Now I'm hooked and started reading fanfiction. I love kakashi and sakura fics. I really like Sakura's War and I hope that you will update soon. I would really like to know what happens next with the girls. Sounds so exciting. Guys really are clueless in what girls can really do. We can take just about anything that they can.
Thank you
Thank you
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you upfate soon!!It has a great plot!!
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm sure you've heard enough of what i'm basically gonna say but i'll say it anyway... This fic had major potential to be great... and while i'll read it through in hopes it'll be better but its a bit on the over dramatic side... the guys are either just jerks or over emotional and they outright bash one another... Especially my "lover" Neji... he says cruel things yes, but not to just anyone, even where i am he's SLOWLY accepting Hinata and recognizing the strength buried within her... which is probably why a few people i know believe he and TenTen will be together, but not out of sheer love, mostly cuz its convenient and they work well together. The characters aprreciate one another even if it does seem they push the girls back for protecting... but i think its a dude thing. All the same if this pleases you to write this way then rock on and keep it up, just know it'll be one of those "Love it or hate it" Kind of fics!
All the same don't stop writing!
All the same don't stop writing!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! That was super awesome! I can't wait to read more!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
b4 i begin i hope i dont hurt your feelings
this story is very ....strange. Most of this story as made most or all of the naruto chara seem like giant jerks! The characters are just too OOC. youve made most of the characters eem like either jerks or murdrs, i seriously dont think ten-ten would LIKE to tare sumone to shreds. Plus, all of it doesnt make any sense! Do you truly think that naruto or most of the others would say those things?(withthe exeption of sasuke) Narutowouldnt thik of sakura as "weak", cause most the time shes beatin the crap outta him. And shikamaru thinks everything is troublesome, evn sleeping. not only that youre making it seam the the girls need to have a positive opinion about them!Overall this story makes me feel more and more like you are not just bashing the male chara,but every man! while sum are bad there are a lot(lee,naruto,jiraiya,etc).All and all, i think that you have just made all the characters in oc's. Im sorry but ill not be reading this fic anylonger.
P.S: If i said anything here that might have offended or hurt you, i apologize,i just had to get it off my chest.
Good luck with all your stories
l8r
this story is very ....strange. Most of this story as made most or all of the naruto chara seem like giant jerks! The characters are just too OOC. youve made most of the characters eem like either jerks or murdrs, i seriously dont think ten-ten would LIKE to tare sumone to shreds. Plus, all of it doesnt make any sense! Do you truly think that naruto or most of the others would say those things?(withthe exeption of sasuke) Narutowouldnt thik of sakura as "weak", cause most the time shes beatin the crap outta him. And shikamaru thinks everything is troublesome, evn sleeping. not only that youre making it seam the the girls need to have a positive opinion about them!Overall this story makes me feel more and more like you are not just bashing the male chara,but every man! while sum are bad there are a lot(lee,naruto,jiraiya,etc).All and all, i think that you have just made all the characters in oc's. Im sorry but ill not be reading this fic anylonger.
P.S: If i said anything here that might have offended or hurt you, i apologize,i just had to get it off my chest.
Good luck with all your stories
l8r
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good fic. I think you're extending the 'punish the boys' chapters a bit too much. Leave that for the girls when they come back.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOO! I've been waiting for you to update. I loved the chapter. It's sop damn funny. They deserve what they got!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like hell on earth for those two guys don't you think...And who is Sasukegoing tobe after if it isn't Sakura or Ino.... Wonder if you are goign to have the girls meetsomeone who can get a hold of the Teme
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness! this is good. I'd like it if ou wrote longer chapters, this is just agonizing to wait for! I like the idea, is it possible to have your permission to use an idea like this? I won't be doing it anytime soon though, I still have to finish writing a couple of stories I've already started. But this is good! keep it up!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
neji still hasnt told his uncle... ooooo. now back up 4 a sec had tsunade n jiriya been sleeping together? n if so how drunk was tsunade?