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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ehm, this is going a tad bit stereotypical, don't you think?
I mean they are only telling the parents the news on their daughters. And not one of them asks for a further explanation or tries to reason at least a bit? All just hear the news and start killing the person telling it? Without a further word?
They don't have a valid reason to pummel them. Of course one can react like that in a kind of panic reaction, but all of them in the same way?
I mean they are only telling the parents the news on their daughters. And not one of them asks for a further explanation or tries to reason at least a bit? All just hear the news and start killing the person telling it? Without a further word?
They don't have a valid reason to pummel them. Of course one can react like that in a kind of panic reaction, but all of them in the same way?
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I understand the reasoning behind it, having the girls change their names is unnecesarily confusing for the reader. Is it absolutely vital to your plot to have the girls have different names? Other than that I really did enjoy your story and can't wait for more.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's cute so far. it makes the boys reslize that they been taking the girls for granted. bravo good job
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the update but I would hate to be Neji right now... He has to tell his uncle that his daughter is gone away from the village and then Ten-Ten's parents hmmm gotta suck being him.... Hope to see an update soon
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
alright cool. i hope c more! ^^
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story but I was wondering were Kyuubi and if he has any role in Naruto's and Hinata's love life keep up the good work.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**laughing evilly** the boys r gonna get it... the boys r gonna get it... the boys r gonna get it... hee-hee-hee. i can only imagine what lord hyuuga will have in store 4 neji when he finds out about hinata. the whole village will have the boys leaving in shame even after the girls come back. i wonder how the girls r doing?
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wOW way to sock it to em girls. Haha Talk About Girl Power Men Can Be Such Jerks Sometimes!! lol well that was a great story i cant wait until you write more id love to read someomore of your work. I hope your feeling better and that your in good health now Please Write More When You Get a Chance -_^
Val
Val
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good so far i hope 2 read the next chapter and i hope it's a kakasaku fanfic i think they're a great couple when sakura is older of course!:P
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what r the chances that neji will still b living after he talks hinatas dad? the boys r going 2 have the whole village hating them now. cant say i blame them.