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for Sakura's War

by KakashiTenshi

person Dragon55
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stupid girls.... so self-righteous. Pour Sakura has "only" Tsunade to train with who is just one of the legendary sannin and the hokage. And Naruto even left, not like it's partly her fault for making him promise to bring Sasuke back. And Naruto is annoying, how about telling him about Hinata to get him something else to do. And of course it's his fault Hinata always hides or falls unconscious instead of approaching him so he might get the chance to notice her.-_-
Oh well, interesting idea, I'm curious what you're going to make of it.
Sasuke and Lee seem a bit OOC, but since you made them older I guess they can change.^^
person Kay-san
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Kay-san's addicted now. I absolutely ADORE this. Especially since it seems to be heading toward some KakaSaku, which is LOVE for me. I hope you feel better, soon. Nothing heals like writing some fanfiction. *blinks at sentence* That may have come across wrong. All I know is if I'm under the weather a little writing seems to take me away from my aches. Hope you find a chance to update soon! Hugs & Kisses!
person mentalkid
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why...but i have this bad feeling that this story will just have lots of charchter bashing of the guys and the girls suddenly getting ubber powerful. Now...I know it probably won't but i'm just asking that you don't. I mean take naruto for instance; he can't tell that Hinata loves him because its so foreign to him, not his fault. Plus, the other guys might mope, but lee will just shout about flames of youth and train 100X times harder than the girls otehrwise he will run around konoha 100 times or whatever. Naruto would probably join him. Kakashi would mope. Neji and Sasuke would just brood. So...probably yeh. Just don't make this a guy bashing fic. (though to be honest, sometimes i want to hit some of the charchters too...especially sasuke...damn rod shoved up his........)
person Rockky Cs
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY HEY! this was great pleeeeaaasssseee keep it going!!! KAKASAKU 4EVER!
person Sono
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo, this a great story please keep it going!
person Laura-chan
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! This is getting interesting! I hate how weak the kunoichi are depicted in Naruto (excluded Temari) and I really, really want them to get revenge on the males! C'mon girls, show them who's the boss (or should I say bosses?)!

I hope this is a Sasu/Saku, among other things: I truly support this couple!

Please keep writing, please ;)
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its about time the women show the men what they will be missing once they are gone! Can't wait to read more of this. Please update soon
person Panther Eyes
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how could they think sakura as weak snice she has a punch that can break a mountain into rubble. men always thinking between their legs n not above their shoulders. question: is kakashi in love w/ sakura?
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is pretty good, I am looking forward to more hopefully soon.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm a nice start. So all the girls left their teams and joined together to get stronger. But whaty is going to happen to the guys they left. Will Naruto see Hinata after she left and put the pieces together that she cares for him. Ino and TenTen are waiting for the two geniuses of the Nara and Hyuuga clan to turn and say they are sorry for what they said now. Hope you continue this story and hope you update soon too......