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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely adorable, in a yummy, delicious, totally cute way. (OMG, i sound like i'm sugar high or on something. oh well!) yeah, i'd like more fics in this vein, so keep up the good work and have fun on your next fic!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He, he. I like the ending so much. Cute... yet hot. :)
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soo good! I'm glad they finally found an even ground... I look forward to your other works!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hot!!!! ...Can u really get sunburnt on ur lips? ...Hmmm, I should try that, hehe... *smirks evilly* Great job!!!!! They were both horny teh whole time. NICE!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bravo bravo! really great ending to a good story. i definetly enjoyed it!
-direchan
-direchan
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww So Cute!!! I'm so happy you finsihed it!!! Nicely Done!!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was just... uhhhhh sorry cant form proper descriptive words...
the characters are fine, not too OOC, slightly because sasuke's less angsty and more horny XD
the characters are fine, not too OOC, slightly because sasuke's less angsty and more horny XD
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! LOL Poor Sasuke, I love how he thought he looked like Hinata... haha, I reckon their pretty in character, ofcourse other than the situation! Love it! Can't wait to read more!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh,I like the way it's getting too. Yay...
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, i always wondered what would happen if sasuke got a sunburn! naruto's so dark, he must either be a natural tanner, or, as your fic implies, has already had quite a few runins with the sun. hmmm. i feel sorry for naruto though, he didn't have anybody to do the same for him as a child... -sighs- great fic anyway and can't wait for the second part to it!