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bah awesome loooovvvesss it!! update soon!!!!

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this story is interesting so far...please update soon *hands out kyubbi cookies*

It Should Be Obvious..... that this is a terrific story.
that you've done a terrific job keeping people
in character
that the plot is interesting
and that you must finish this story.

cool story .i like the way its going
keep up the good work, hope you update soon.
God speed.

This is a painful news announcement.

This goes out to all of yura´s fans...I hope you get the chance to read this.

Yura was in getting out of the hospital when they got into a terrible accident. She and her daughter didn´t make it...

I hope you get a chance to read this soon...please do me this favor and inform as many of her loyal fans as possbile. She has a rather large fanbase and I don´t think I´ll be able to get to all of them by myself...

-Damp

We will miss you yura...may you enjoy yourself, and you will be in our prayers...

I dont know how old this story is, since I just found it via the search option, but I do hope you are still updating it. Overall, this is a really good story and a nice take on the Demon Naruto angle. You also make a good point in that after defeating Orochimaru, Sound would be there for the taking. While Sasuke does pick and choose who from the Sound he wants to make up Hebi, being his own Kage was a very viable secondary option. ^^ Great job on picking that up and running with it.

And like I said before, I hope you keep up the good work and finish this. :)

Sorry!!! Yes I will update this but it will take me a little longer to do it. I'm sorry about taking so long!!! I've been going through different ideas on how I want this to go from here before I continue it. I had a plan before but because of some new things and characters in the manga, I was thinking of going in a different direction that planned before. I will do my best to start on this again soon.

Are you ever going to update this? I'm anquious to know how their relationship is going to progress.

OI! An update sometime this year would be nice, I'm old enough as it is.