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for It Should Be Obvious

by bluegenjutsu

person Ukagau
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! I don't think I've come across a story where Sauske takes over Sound...ingenious. I like it! ^_^ Please continue on with the story! Cookies for you for a neat plot!
person lo
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute story.
person wow
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it!! it's really a good story...update soon :D
person kyuubi no chibi
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh noooo, U must update or you'll kill me I wanna know what happenedXD!! Oh and pleaz let Sasuke see naruto in his first fox form so that you can give him a fetisch for fox- -ears,-tails and fangs. Oh ohoho!! can you put in a scen with Kakashi getting punished?*evil smirk**Tihihi*
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess, the secret Kyuubi is refering to, is that Naruto can now bear children, which means Sasuke won't have to marry a girl he doen't love. Course I am kinda confused on one thing, how would telling him before he kills Itachi be bad? that would be good news, and would more then likely give him something to live for.
person Cutie-Pie
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is great, really loving your story. Naruto's sounds hot, and he killed that snake-bastard and specky. WAHOOO.

Anywho update soon, wanna know what happens next.
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Naruto and Sasuke beat Itachi and that Kyuubi tell Naruto the truth so that he and Sasuke can start working on reviving the Uchiha clan. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Suke-Chan
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update, I wanna know what happens next. I feel sad for Naruto. But I love your story very much, can't wait for the update.
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another update, cool. ^^ So, when is the next one coming, and are they gonna kiss soon?
person dana
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was another good chapter it was really great. my main question is did merging with kyu make naruto a hermephidite is that what the hokage found out. i can't wait til the next update to find out.