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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will you write more of this story?
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start. I'd like this to be yaoi, maybe Naru/Neji. With his new abilities, I think they would be a perfect pair, especially for sparring
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic. I haven't read many Naruto fics, not because I don't like them. I have to be familiar with all of the characters in this series. Anyway, it's a good beginning and make it a het fic. I've noticed that the majority of these fics are yaoi. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So can you please give us a bit of a background of your story. When did the assassination attempt occur and who taught him all of the Jutsus.... Why did they alternate his apperance and mess with his seal. Please continue your story please make this a het fic to many yaoi out there
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! i get to pop the review cherry!! -blondie cheerleader mode- like oh my god, can you say furbarred? like i mean one assasination attempted, i would of thought it would of been done before he "graduated". well considering what he houses. so here are some questions to keep in mind and i only hope for it to be answered somewhat in the future: why after he got put on team 7 and not before he was like i said earlier, "graduated" after the whole mizuki incident? plenty of time for them to have control over naruto ya know? and he would be easier to break down considering that he would still somewhat have his innocence and naitivity? lol just throwing some points across cause this one prologe really caught my attention and i would love to see it grow. damn shame there is no way to have favs and alerts in this site for stories.