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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was HOT! but I liked the whole fic as well.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
((crying)) no.. he can't lose him again! and of Naruto of course saskue was yours don't ever think other wise! i forbid you to! too bad this is a one-shoot it would be great to see naruto have his sasuke again. o well i already know he will anyways. love you naruto. and i also love this story great job again.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, it's so sad, and yet sweet at the same time. PLease make a sequel where Sasuke comes back to "his dobe". ^^
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is so very hot lemon!!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the interactions were absolutly adorable, even if the flow was a little disjointed in some places, and some words were kinda mixed up. all in all though, it was a cute little one shot, not a whole lot of plot but it was short and it had sex so thats totally frogivable ^.^
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequal! I demand a sequal! That rocked and I nosebled all over my keyboard. Please do a sequal where Sasuke returns for good(big shiny puppy eyes)PLEASE
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hated the words gush and portal, they didn't sound right, but apart from that, congrats on your first lemon!
Really cool and sad. Somehow I imagined Naruto being knocked out rather than just letting him go though. But again, its cool.
Really cool and sad. Somehow I imagined Naruto being knocked out rather than just letting him go though. But again, its cool.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I liked it. Very bittersweet.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ouu~ that was hott~
the ending~
it can mean many things~~~
can't think of it as good or bad~~
so it's interesting~
so i could only hope that naruto will see him again in the future~
juss cuz they are oh so adorable couple hehe
loved it~ thanks!
the ending~
it can mean many things~~~
can't think of it as good or bad~~
so it's interesting~
so i could only hope that naruto will see him again in the future~
juss cuz they are oh so adorable couple hehe
loved it~ thanks!