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by AubreyWitch

schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well ....... first off it just feels like a re-tell of whats been going on in the show (dont have the manga)

it is an interesting idea of their relationship, but because it feels like a re-tell its kind of slow going, if it was a twist of the story it would be more interesting, for example if for some reason some one else joined them too, like just as an example say Hinata and the three of them were sharing the bed or what have you.

but thats just me.
person silverserenity
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love you're story so far and I'm eager to read the rest of it!
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. It's my first NaruSaku and it made me look more into the coupling! Keep up the good work!!! :D
person Arknine
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is very emotional and ties in very well with the series. I hope that you will finish the story, as I would like to know how it ends and if they ever really become comfortable with each other.

Keep writing and have fun
person Sheldor
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Period. It is so good. If I were more articulate I could fully express how good this fic is but surely you must know. Every chapter was so real and raw, the emotion was palpable. I don't know what to say, I've been reading fanfition for around 6 years and this fic is like top 5 best ever out of all fanons. Truly magical experience. Please continue, this fic is insanely good! God I love it.
person Xenodia
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this, you do such a great job at conveying the emotion and have such great insight with the characters. I loved reading this and I hope to read more soon. I know it's been almost a year since your last update, but I really hope you decide to continue this. =D
person Legacy
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! you're back!
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see an update for this, it has been my favorite narusaku for a year or so.
person Draklin
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, and not becuase it has good lemons in it, its a great story and i cant wait for more.
person mike
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
plz tell me there's more
it was so wonderful writen, i loved the way u played out naruto and sakura, PURE GENIUS!!!