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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a good read. Somewhat confusing and depressing as hell, but still good.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, great update. LOved the chapter & the lemon. Please update when you can! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahoo an update thank you so much....dont give up naruto sakura will come around.....keep up the awesome work i love this fic please update as soon as possible
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
actually i'm a team7/threesome fan but *____* whahh..i love this story! so much! sakura is confused, but cares deeply for naruto(i liked it when she felt silly telling him she would visit him more often)
And naruto is so sweet thinking about her/worrying he might pressure her into something she doesn't want/letting her decide/and willing to give her everything...He's in love ^^ But I also like that he's not the poor victim of the village here, like other stories show him to be,I mean he is a victim but not the 'omg-everyone-hates-me-so-I-will-emo-and-cry-sad-tears-for-the-rest-of-my-life'kind of person. No. He fights, has feelings, is confused himself, sometimes pretends to laugh(fake smiles are to reassure others more than him), other times his smile is sincere, and he is so honest with himself...he's very human.
Also, he didn't want to submit to the urge of giving in the 1st time, not just for sakura's sake but for his own good too(wanted to protect himself from getting hurt)At least he has some self-respect. That's more decent. I hope Sakura makes him happy in the end, he deserves it.
I also hope you update soon! ^O^yay, good work
And naruto is so sweet thinking about her/worrying he might pressure her into something she doesn't want/letting her decide/and willing to give her everything...He's in love ^^ But I also like that he's not the poor victim of the village here, like other stories show him to be,I mean he is a victim but not the 'omg-everyone-hates-me-so-I-will-emo-and-cry-sad-tears-for-the-rest-of-my-life'kind of person. No. He fights, has feelings, is confused himself, sometimes pretends to laugh(fake smiles are to reassure others more than him), other times his smile is sincere, and he is so honest with himself...he's very human.
Also, he didn't want to submit to the urge of giving in the 1st time, not just for sakura's sake but for his own good too(wanted to protect himself from getting hurt)At least he has some self-respect. That's more decent. I hope Sakura makes him happy in the end, he deserves it.
I also hope you update soon! ^O^yay, good work
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dig this fic. I feel kinda bad for Naruto. It's like, I'll take you anyway I can get you. Keep the updates coming
Rox
Rox
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, and you manage to keep the characters in-character. Please keep it going, I'd like to see a happy ending, and by "happy" I of course mean something in which Sasuke comes back and gets turned down by Sakura for Naruto. (I don't like Sasuke... at all.)
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's a good story but please make sakura realize how STUPID she is when she continues to hold on to her childish crush on sasuke! make her appreciate naruto more!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I came here for smut, but I stayed for your awesome writing and the great story, which, in reality, doesn't have all that much smut at all. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I hope you update soon!!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... poor Naruto & Sakura! hehe! Anyway, great job. I hope they get their relationship figured out soon. I also liked how you put the real meaning of their words after what they had said. Great job & update when you want to &/or have time! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice fic, i'm liked how you didn't quickly fix there issues or more like sakura's issues.