rate_review Reviews

(I review as I read.)
Wow, that was fast. . . . I like that paragraph with the use of “here” and “there.” . . . Do I sense a little denial in Sasuke? . . . ^^ “And they weren’t f***ing. And why were they still talking?” ^^ . . . Sasuke’s hot; I love his threats. . . . You said it, Naruto. He. Is. So. -- yeah, you get my meaning. . . . Ooh, GREAT ending!! :D The Shadow of Doubt! I was going to say that you should’ve dragged the story out a little more -- not plot-wise, but porn-wise -- but that ending line made it all unnecessary! This is going on my list!

This is definitely the sign of a good author. This story is sexy, descriptive, and beautifully written. Any author that can write smut without all the disgusting dirty talk and unnecessary details really demands my respect.

This was good. That last line was sad though.

*puddle*

last line hurts :(

Wonderfully awkward and hot and uncomfortable and... whew.

:“Idiot,” Sasuke breathed...:
Love that line.

I can quite picture them doing that... it figures... nyah... it has possibilities... maybe you can do a couple more one shots as they develop into something else or something? *hint hint* I like it... nyah!

I really liked this, both of them were very in character. It was a refreshing to read!