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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you got my attention....Where's the rest? lol
person OrochiGreel
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More Please!!!!! I hope there is a threesome!(Itachi,Sai and Naruto:WHAT?!!!!!)
person animelover
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this was just cool ... does it HAVE to be an itachisai? couldn't you change to itanaru? had to try! LOL! i like this concept and am curious to see how it goes ...
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I started reading this on ff.net... does this mean there will be more soon because it is marvelous. I ADORE Naruto. No matter how much I try I can't make Naruto seem that... cool!
And Itachi is great. I like a good guy Itachi now and then.
My favorite line:
"I was just forced to drink demon blood."

"Yup."

"I'm killing you as soon as we get to Konoha."

Yeah, Itachi... Naruto seems really worried... he just killed three of your 'friends' without breaking a sweat or did you forget that already??
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and on an unrelated note... I LOVE FANG! I think he and I will get along just fine. Thank you so much for the review. It made me giggle and blush and laugh and just well, sigh, you rock!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I'd like to see Naru pair up with someone too and gods, not a femme! Only hiccup I have is facial peircings. HOnestly, that could be a hinderance in a fight. But I like the long haired look!
person Deidara
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey that was good...

You need to write more xx
person oohshiny
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you already kno m email from why orange but just in case its deannathx@comcast.net couldd you add me to this notification list too? if it dun exist make one. judging from the fact i gave you my email to be notified of updates, you can probably guess i luvd the story.
person Sarah
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
person wildkit
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You must post more!!!!