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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Xenobia
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EWWWW...yucka-ducka! You may think you can't write a fight scene but you managed just fine.

Hmmm...an undercover spy? Might work but I'll need to continue reading to see... I wonder how Sasuke will deal with the turn of events?

Hey, can you put this one on my update request as well?

Luvs to ya Honey...and keep on writing!
Xenobia
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great !
Just sad that it won't be a ItaNaru.... >.<
Na I will it even like that

Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
person Shosuro
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!
I am an avid reader of your stories on FanFiction.net and I was wondering when you were going to write a Ita/Sai fiction!!Thank you!!! I can't wait until you update...hopefully it will be soon!!! Oh I notice that you didn't do your signature opening and closing with Itachi and Sai as assistants. What happened? That was always fun to read when I read your stories.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodyyy! Liked it veryyy much but I think you made Naruto too much out of character! Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapters and see how you develop the plot. So far it's very promising.
Also, if you pair anyone up with Naruto could it be Sasuke or include a little bit of Naru/Sasu. Until next time, bye bye!
person kaa-san
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.