rate_review Reviews

Well, I wasn't disappointed in how hot the ending was. The last lemon was very steamy. I hope you write more in the future.

thats ok! iruka X naruto rocks my socks as well so this ending is okie dokey for me. thats another pairing i'm deprived of. it been a blast reading this. thanks for sharing! have a nice weekend!

i so want naruto to end up with shino for his mate. that would be so fricking sweet. and i'm so proud of sasuke for telling it asit is about how he felt about him and naru being together. looking foward to your next and final *sniffs* update.

*stuffing tissue to stop nosebleed* ................WOW..............*passes out from nosebleed*........*gets up * WHO IS THE ANBU GUY??????????

Oh oh oh!! You are so evil!! Here I am, sitting in the dark suppose to be cramming for my exam and I jsut had to read this and you leave it at such a steaming ending!! And yes, yes I have read the last two chapters. ugh I don't want to think WHY that Karin woman would be so loyal to ole snakey (cringes inwardly) Ooh bad images! Get outta my brain!! Ugh so Sasuke turned him down ne? Well finally they don't end up together! Now Naruto and Shino is not a very common pairing but hey it works for me! Though now I'm wondering--who the hell is the ANBU?? Oh yeah, the fish seller (cracks knuckles) What I'd give to set him 'straight'. I love your story and I love Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon! They are jsut wonderful :D

Freakin HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was hot! Can't wait to see it end!

Yet anther wonderful chapter, i'm a little sad it'll all be ending soon.... on a side note I LOVE MERCEDS LACKEY! The last herald mage trilogy was my favorite, i read them so much they literally fell apart into pieces, alot of tape is holding those books together.

With a set up like that going in to the last chapter, I guess it's going to be w/Iruka. If that's who it'll be, while not my favorite pairing, I'm sure you'll have no trouble making it worth it. Overall, great story and hope to see more from you.

Wait. No, there can't be only one more chapter. Who's going to get Naruto. Is Iruka going to tell Naruto he loves him. Or is there somthing else that's going to get in the way? Mah! too many questions, too little time. *sobs* Oh well think you for wrighting this wonderful story. Keep up the good work. arigatougozaimasu *bows to the great wrighter of Naruto fandom.*