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for 'Tis the Season

by emp78

person eve4mem
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please put in an Naruto/Iruka pairing. He's going at it with everyone in town and then some how Iruka cannot get any? Please :(
person wildkit
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I love horny Naruto!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh teh smut. i think PWP are my three favorite letters in the english language right now ^.^
person tovah
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! I want Iruka/naruto! Do you have any plans on doing that pair?
person tovah
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Or Genma/naruto
person tovah
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for that one it was fantastic! best one yet! I so love Genma.
person Zannie
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha. Pooor Jiraya. Serves him right the letch. Hope he gets alot of readers for the amount of blood he lost. Im sure Kakashi will buy at least 10 copies since his in it and hand the others out in the street out of vanity.

Anyways, cool fic can't wait to see more and can I request pretty please that Jiraya gets some too just because it'd be fitting...
person Shosuro
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story because it has so many different partners for Naruto. What I don't like about it is that in the first chapter you said that Naruto was 18. Then in like chapter 2 or 3, you say that Naruto was still a genin. That doesn't seem real to me. I would think that he would have at the very least been chunin. But its your story so who am I to say anything wrong or bad about....I guess I just did......anyway I wonder who is on the list to get fucked by or to fuck Naruto.
person wildkit
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need to make a gang bang scene. That fit your story perfectly.