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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, It's me again!
First, I want to tell you that I had pick som of Cheysuli's plot bunnies and I'm writting the first of them now, I'll let you know when I publish the story *hugs you*
Now, I absolutly loved this chapter, the short part when Orochimaru made Neji take off his headband was great, the thig with Sasuke's jealousy was a great point, I can imagine him saying to himsefl "he's is mine, damnit *Uchiha death glare of doom* grrrr *glomps Neji* MINE! got it?" jajaja, the picture makes me laugh.
Anyway, the story was sad, porr Hizashi, but it makes everything make sense and I liked how you buld the story of how Neji ended with Orochimaru, it was very interesting, all the feelings and way to descrive the most importan points and of course how Orochimaru took what he wanted.
So, I'm happy you got your PC back, take care and see you later!
First, I want to tell you that I had pick som of Cheysuli's plot bunnies and I'm writting the first of them now, I'll let you know when I publish the story *hugs you*
Now, I absolutly loved this chapter, the short part when Orochimaru made Neji take off his headband was great, the thig with Sasuke's jealousy was a great point, I can imagine him saying to himsefl "he's is mine, damnit *Uchiha death glare of doom* grrrr *glomps Neji* MINE! got it?" jajaja, the picture makes me laugh.
Anyway, the story was sad, porr Hizashi, but it makes everything make sense and I liked how you buld the story of how Neji ended with Orochimaru, it was very interesting, all the feelings and way to descrive the most importan points and of course how Orochimaru took what he wanted.
So, I'm happy you got your PC back, take care and see you later!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Ahh. Yes.. xDD
Very interesting chapter. Many question finally got an answer...
Oh, yes, I'm really tired now, so this review is.. hmm.. complicated..Is that the right word?
Hmm. Good chapter anyways. Keep writing and updating.
Very interesting chapter. Many question finally got an answer...
Oh, yes, I'm really tired now, so this review is.. hmm.. complicated..Is that the right word?
Hmm. Good chapter anyways. Keep writing and updating.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They were for the last time togeter?! OMG ! This chapter made my sister cry.
Ah. How I love SasuNeji..
I hope you update soon. I like all the other stories you write too.
But KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON !
Ah. How I love SasuNeji..
I hope you update soon. I like all the other stories you write too.
But KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON !
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so...great!
All the feelings and emotions in there, it was just great. I love the way you made it.
It was also sad, you describe that they got something and yet they couldn't have it so it was sad to read and yet I liked it.
Nice chapter, I just love the way you write.
All the feelings and emotions in there, it was just great. I love the way you made it.
It was also sad, you describe that they got something and yet they couldn't have it so it was sad to read and yet I liked it.
Nice chapter, I just love the way you write.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke/Neji! LOVELY!
Wonderful start! Very interesting. I hope you can update soon.
Yeah, I've been looking for this kind of fic! LOVE YA !
Keep writing.
Wonderful start! Very interesting. I hope you can update soon.
Yeah, I've been looking for this kind of fic! LOVE YA !
Keep writing.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My my, you started another story! I read this plot in the page one and I found it interesting, I am reading some of the plots too so later I'll write one too.
So, with the simple fac that the story is about Neji and Sasuke you had ofiacially caught my attention, did I mention I like your stories? If I didn't know you know, jajaja.
Take care!
So, with the simple fac that the story is about Neji and Sasuke you had ofiacially caught my attention, did I mention I like your stories? If I didn't know you know, jajaja.
Take care!