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July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, new chapters! Full of hot action!
I'm glad to finally read the Laguna/Neji that I've fantasized about.
It was great! I loved it because Neji wasn't exactly the passive one, but he still clearly was young and a little naïve when it came to reading the other mans feelings about them.
It was also great that both of them opened up to each other about their father for example, and were there for each other, even though they are an unlikely match. :D
And then the threesome?
O__O Kakashi rocked. Yes. He really gave it to Seifer didn't he? Haha, that was so great, and hilarious too, in he end.
I'm glad to finally read the Laguna/Neji that I've fantasized about.
It was great! I loved it because Neji wasn't exactly the passive one, but he still clearly was young and a little naïve when it came to reading the other mans feelings about them.
It was also great that both of them opened up to each other about their father for example, and were there for each other, even though they are an unlikely match. :D
And then the threesome?
O__O Kakashi rocked. Yes. He really gave it to Seifer didn't he? Haha, that was so great, and hilarious too, in he end.
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAhahahhaha oh gosh I realy enjoyd reading this so far!!! it made me frown and smile and sometimes at the same time! ^^ pleas update sometime soon. or well I hope you will ^^ you've sertenly gained a new fan! XD
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!
Hehee, yay for the SasuZell smex!
Hmhm, they really were new to anal sex. xD No preparations? Poor Zell.
But they both came in the end, and that's what matter, right? xDD
But still, it didn't end all that nicely, did it?
Both feels used, even though that kind of was their plan right? To imagine each other to someone else.
Didn't quite go like it was planned. xD
Really good chapter! I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Hehee, yay for the SasuZell smex!
Hmhm, they really were new to anal sex. xD No preparations? Poor Zell.
But they both came in the end, and that's what matter, right? xDD
But still, it didn't end all that nicely, did it?
Both feels used, even though that kind of was their plan right? To imagine each other to someone else.
Didn't quite go like it was planned. xD
Really good chapter! I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was the hottest chapter you've written so far (not that the others weren't cool too). i fucking loved it, this is one of the best crossovers i've read, ever.
PLEASE keep writing, i love your work
PLEASE keep writing, i love your work
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really, really sweet! Aw... I loved how impatient and eager Naruto was, and how Squall was struggling to keep his cool. ^_^ Mmm... love rimming...
The part where Squall was massaging Naruto's ass while he was inside him... so freaking hot. And their little conversation at the end was really cute, and very sweet. ^_^
You did a great job! Thanks so much again for doing this!
The part where Squall was massaging Naruto's ass while he was inside him... so freaking hot. And their little conversation at the end was really cute, and very sweet. ^_^
You did a great job! Thanks so much again for doing this!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aah, how sexy!
Squall and Naruto fits together well. ;D
Seriously, that was hot!
Naruto's so impatient. xD And seemenly horny. xD
Heh, poor Sasuke and Zell, though. xD If only they had seen that!
But they'll work together just as good. xD
I loved this chapter!
Heck, I love the whole fic.
Update soon and Keep writing!
Squall and Naruto fits together well. ;D
Seriously, that was hot!
Naruto's so impatient. xD And seemenly horny. xD
Heh, poor Sasuke and Zell, though. xD If only they had seen that!
But they'll work together just as good. xD
I loved this chapter!
Heck, I love the whole fic.
Update soon and Keep writing!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahah. Ooh. Seifer! He's such an ASS ! But it was funny! Heh.
Ah, poor Kakashi. But Kaka-sensei will show them who's the real boss is, eh?
Can't wait to see that. xD
Kakashi x Irvine x Seifer.. It ALMOST sounds impossible.. But it's not and I'm so happy about it!
Hmm. S(eye)fer.. Sounds good. S(ee)fer.. Seafer.. Sea fish.. Nah.
..*murmuring something unimportant*
Right!
I love this story! I hope you can update soon again! Keep writing! :D
Ah, poor Kakashi. But Kaka-sensei will show them who's the real boss is, eh?
Can't wait to see that. xD
Kakashi x Irvine x Seifer.. It ALMOST sounds impossible.. But it's not and I'm so happy about it!
Hmm. S(eye)fer.. Sounds good. S(ee)fer.. Seafer.. Sea fish.. Nah.
..*murmuring something unimportant*
Right!
I love this story! I hope you can update soon again! Keep writing! :D
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa-ho! Seifer was seriously cracking me up. Such a freakin Dick! That whole conversation was funny - Seifer taunting, Irvine correcting him, Kakashi trying to ignore them both. And - whoa, Kakashi almost lost it... and then Kakashi did lose it. It's too bad Irvine had the bat - I bet he would've kicked Seifer's ass.^_^
I like how Kiros went through all the trouble of explaining to Kakashi what was up with Seifer's asshole-ness, *before* he told him they stole his wallet. Ha ha.
And Kakashi's a girl's volleyball coach? I don't remember if you said that before. That's soo funny. ^_^
Oh dear god - the thought of Kakashi/Seifer/Irvine... *drools* I hope Kakashi shows him who's the boss. Take that, Seifer! Take it! lol
Yay for another chapter! Woo-hoo!
*love*
I like how Kiros went through all the trouble of explaining to Kakashi what was up with Seifer's asshole-ness, *before* he told him they stole his wallet. Ha ha.
And Kakashi's a girl's volleyball coach? I don't remember if you said that before. That's soo funny. ^_^
Oh dear god - the thought of Kakashi/Seifer/Irvine... *drools* I hope Kakashi shows him who's the boss. Take that, Seifer! Take it! lol
Yay for another chapter! Woo-hoo!
*love*
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaa-Haaa!!! You're right, Laguna is SOOOOOOO a Boss. I love the way he hgoes all stern-father-figure on bratty little Neji. And Neji listens!
I'm so impressed with how much thought you've put into this - everybody has a great backstory, all the pairings are so well thought-out... Neji and Laguna's stories in this chapter particularly impressed me. It makes sense that they would share a connection... and knowing he didn't just leave Squall... er... Leon behind is much better.
Hee-hee He was petting Neji. Taming him, hmmm? And where's he taking the young Hyuuga, hmmm? I wonder...
Awesome chapter! You are made of win!
I'm so impressed with how much thought you've put into this - everybody has a great backstory, all the pairings are so well thought-out... Neji and Laguna's stories in this chapter particularly impressed me. It makes sense that they would share a connection... and knowing he didn't just leave Squall... er... Leon behind is much better.
Hee-hee He was petting Neji. Taming him, hmmm? And where's he taking the young Hyuuga, hmmm? I wonder...
Awesome chapter! You are made of win!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aa YES!
I loved the chapter. Man, poor Neji. And Good Laguna!
I hope you update soon.. I wonder.. Where is Laguna taking Neji? And he was drinking and driving the cat at the same time?! ..I forgive you. xDDDD
I hope you update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next! KEEP WRITING! UPDATE SOOON !!
I loved the chapter. Man, poor Neji. And Good Laguna!
I hope you update soon.. I wonder.. Where is Laguna taking Neji? And he was drinking and driving the cat at the same time?! ..I forgive you. xDDDD
I hope you update soon! Can't wait to read what happens next! KEEP WRITING! UPDATE SOOON !!