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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh good chapter! Once again, heh. :D
Well, well, well. Sasuke has a crush on Naruto? -giggle- I don't really like SasuNaru so I'm happy that Naruto's with Squall. xDD
Aah. Zell and Sasuke. One-night-stand, really? Great!
Aah. How I love your fic. I hope you update soon again! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOOOON !
Well, well, well. Sasuke has a crush on Naruto? -giggle- I don't really like SasuNaru so I'm happy that Naruto's with Squall. xDD
Aah. Zell and Sasuke. One-night-stand, really? Great!
Aah. How I love your fic. I hope you update soon again! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOOOON !
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, too. I really, really, REALLY do. ^_^
Kukuku... Zell and Sasuke... just thinking about it is making me lightheaded. Holy shit, yum. I love the setup, too: a game of pretend. Sexxxy!
Ah, you keep teasing me with the setups... just kidding, I'm patient. I like the conversation Zell and Sasuke had. And Sasuke's inner thoughts were very detailed, very well explained. His actions make a lot of sense, now. Though he is quite bratty... sometimes, I think that's why I like him so much. I dunno, I think maybe this blond/brunet pair may work out even better than Squall/Naruto.
Poor Zell... always pining after Squally-boy, almost never brave enough to go after him. But he was brave enough tonight, neh? Hmmm... or perhaps this brunet might end up breaking his heart, too. I'm hoping for either: Sasuke falls to Zell's boyish charm, and doesn't need to pretend anymore, or: they have a night of good, dirty sex to clear out their systems, and neither of them gets hung up on the other. Or, I don't know, a little angst might be good, too... What am I saying?!? Whatever you decide to write will surely be amazing, because you kick soooo much ass as an author.
Thank you again, thank you, thank you, thank you for taking up this challenge!
Kukuku... Zell and Sasuke... just thinking about it is making me lightheaded. Holy shit, yum. I love the setup, too: a game of pretend. Sexxxy!
Ah, you keep teasing me with the setups... just kidding, I'm patient. I like the conversation Zell and Sasuke had. And Sasuke's inner thoughts were very detailed, very well explained. His actions make a lot of sense, now. Though he is quite bratty... sometimes, I think that's why I like him so much. I dunno, I think maybe this blond/brunet pair may work out even better than Squall/Naruto.
Poor Zell... always pining after Squally-boy, almost never brave enough to go after him. But he was brave enough tonight, neh? Hmmm... or perhaps this brunet might end up breaking his heart, too. I'm hoping for either: Sasuke falls to Zell's boyish charm, and doesn't need to pretend anymore, or: they have a night of good, dirty sex to clear out their systems, and neither of them gets hung up on the other. Or, I don't know, a little angst might be good, too... What am I saying?!? Whatever you decide to write will surely be amazing, because you kick soooo much ass as an author.
Thank you again, thank you, thank you, thank you for taking up this challenge!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! Another chapter! Wheeee!
Heh... don't worry, I've been a little 'busy' myself lately.
Mmmm... SquallxNaruto. Yumness. Finger sucking, dry humping, horny teenage boy yumness. I liked Squall's AU background - it suits him well. And, awwwww, Naruto's so eager... ^_^ He's so cute.
BTW, your chapter titles are do funny. This one especially. ^_~
Yes! Another great chappie. I look forward eagerly to the next.
Heh... don't worry, I've been a little 'busy' myself lately.
Mmmm... SquallxNaruto. Yumness. Finger sucking, dry humping, horny teenage boy yumness. I liked Squall's AU background - it suits him well. And, awwwww, Naruto's so eager... ^_^ He's so cute.
BTW, your chapter titles are do funny. This one especially. ^_~
Yes! Another great chappie. I look forward eagerly to the next.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Drama, drama, drama.
Heh, Seifer's still such an ass, but it's kind of funny too. xD
And Sasuke.. You meanie! Poor Naruto. At least he has a boyfriend who comforts him.
Hmm, I wonder where Neji is.. And Laguna has volunteered to help Kakashi find him? Sounds good. ;D
Though I don't expect the lemons to come yet...
UPDATE SOON ! Great fic. :D
Heh, Seifer's still such an ass, but it's kind of funny too. xD
And Sasuke.. You meanie! Poor Naruto. At least he has a boyfriend who comforts him.
Hmm, I wonder where Neji is.. And Laguna has volunteered to help Kakashi find him? Sounds good. ;D
Though I don't expect the lemons to come yet...
UPDATE SOON ! Great fic. :D
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray hooray hooray! (That's three cheers.) Love it. Seifer's fuckety-fucks - lol. I cracked up. He's such a dick. Good job. ^_^ Loved the conversation between Kiros and Laguna... so, Laguna's gonna go and rescue little Neji, hmmm? Hee hee. Knight in shining armor. But I might be wrong about that. And Sasuke finally cracked! *claps*
So many undercurrents, here. You are doing so much more than I had ever hoped for. *love*
And I know what you mean about dialogue being a pain in the ass. Three pages of dialogue can take me, like, two weeks to write, but then I can write six pages of smut in six hours. But don't worry, your dialogue is good! In fact, it's SUPER! Like the stuff Naruto whispered to Sasuke when he wanted to sit down, and the Kiros/Laguna talk - good stuff!
And I quite like your chapter titles. They're fun. ^_^
This fic still has me squee-ing. Squee!
So many undercurrents, here. You are doing so much more than I had ever hoped for. *love*
And I know what you mean about dialogue being a pain in the ass. Three pages of dialogue can take me, like, two weeks to write, but then I can write six pages of smut in six hours. But don't worry, your dialogue is good! In fact, it's SUPER! Like the stuff Naruto whispered to Sasuke when he wanted to sit down, and the Kiros/Laguna talk - good stuff!
And I quite like your chapter titles. They're fun. ^_^
This fic still has me squee-ing. Squee!
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah YEEESS !
OMG! What's wrong with Neji? You have to tell.
This chapter was really good. Good game they had.
YYEESS ! Laguna won Neji's ass! HA ! Good. :3
I hope you update soon!
And Update your other stories too.
-SMOOCH-
OMG! What's wrong with Neji? You have to tell.
This chapter was really good. Good game they had.
YYEESS ! Laguna won Neji's ass! HA ! Good. :3
I hope you update soon!
And Update your other stories too.
-SMOOCH-
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! Great job!
Hee hee hee. Is Sasuke jealous? One can only wonder... Kakashi's flashback didn't bother me; you didn't go into any detail about the non-con, so it's okay. (Wouldn't have bothered me, anyway, even if you did, but...)
Ta da! Laguna shows up to save the day! Hooray!
Ha ha, Squall has a quick recovery time because he junctions for Spd. That cracked me up. This story is seriously, SERIOUSLY sooo much fun to read. I did a lot of giggling. Thanks so much for writing it.
Still curious what's up with poor Neji. Is he gonna get some sexual healing? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hee hee hee. Is Sasuke jealous? One can only wonder... Kakashi's flashback didn't bother me; you didn't go into any detail about the non-con, so it's okay. (Wouldn't have bothered me, anyway, even if you did, but...)
Ta da! Laguna shows up to save the day! Hooray!
Ha ha, Squall has a quick recovery time because he junctions for Spd. That cracked me up. This story is seriously, SERIOUSLY sooo much fun to read. I did a lot of giggling. Thanks so much for writing it.
Still curious what's up with poor Neji. Is he gonna get some sexual healing? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squeee! I like this fic! The boys are so cute! I can't wait for the one-on-one interactions. ;)
I hope you update soon!
I hope you update soon!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.
I'd say.. Irvine x Neji. They're both Shooting Guards. ^^
Heh. Oh well. In the orher hand.. Laguna is the coach of the other team.. It would be really interesting... WAAAHH !
I can't decide eather..
Well. I vote for Irvine x Neji.
Aah. I like this story. It has fire in it. I like the way Naruto and Sasuke are fighting, poor Kakashi. And Neji's nose.. xDD
I hope you reveal the reasons for Sasuke and Neji's behaviour in the future chapters.
The Balamb SeeDs.. hmm.. Interesting team they have here. xD Seifer's such an ass. He's just good in that way. He's the 'assistant coach'.. Where's the real coach, Laguna? (Sorry if it was in the chapter.. :o )
UPDATE SOOOON ! NYAH NYAH..... :3
I'd say.. Irvine x Neji. They're both Shooting Guards. ^^
Heh. Oh well. In the orher hand.. Laguna is the coach of the other team.. It would be really interesting... WAAAHH !
I can't decide eather..
Well. I vote for Irvine x Neji.
Aah. I like this story. It has fire in it. I like the way Naruto and Sasuke are fighting, poor Kakashi. And Neji's nose.. xDD
I hope you reveal the reasons for Sasuke and Neji's behaviour in the future chapters.
The Balamb SeeDs.. hmm.. Interesting team they have here. xD Seifer's such an ass. He's just good in that way. He's the 'assistant coach'.. Where's the real coach, Laguna? (Sorry if it was in the chapter.. :o )
UPDATE SOOOON ! NYAH NYAH..... :3
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah.
I love ya! You are a wonderful writer, I tell you.
Hmm. I don't know Irvines age, but he's damn handsome, I like his hat. ^^
He would be perfect for our sweet sweet Neji-kun. Thought.. I like the 'lover old enough to be your father' thing too..
Well. My vote goes for Irvine x Neji.
SOOOO ! Are you going to update soon, huh? Please, do.
Maah. I'm totally hooked with all these your wonderful stories.
I love ya! You are a wonderful writer, I tell you.
Hmm. I don't know Irvines age, but he's damn handsome, I like his hat. ^^
He would be perfect for our sweet sweet Neji-kun. Thought.. I like the 'lover old enough to be your father' thing too..
Well. My vote goes for Irvine x Neji.
SOOOO ! Are you going to update soon, huh? Please, do.
Maah. I'm totally hooked with all these your wonderful stories.