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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, is there really any plot?
Oh, well...
Oh, well...
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think people should be glad that Naruto isn't the rapist. Please don't let others interfere with what you are writing - this is your story and your idea.
Please continue.
Please continue.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm, I believe it's Sasuke itself but u might change it since I said it, but anyway. not that many rape fics out there, so good job of writing one. U shouldnt care about those complaining, write cause u like it and someone will read and enjoy too ^^
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad it's not Naruto. He would never do anything like that. I can't wait to find out who is the one who took Sakura.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't let people's decisions ruin a great story. It really is a great story and would be a shame if you stopped because some people can only get "satisfaction" from one character. Please don't let them get to you. If you yourself decide "eh, this story just isn't doing it for me." Then thats no problem, though I would be sadened. Just please don't let people get to you.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wouldn't be surprised if it was sasuke.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea it probably is Sasuke that or Kakashi, Lee would be interesting though. But since its not Naruto, i have no other reason to continue reading. ^^
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one is very exciting! what will be next, who is that bastard... hope to find out soon... please UPDATE!!!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, please continue!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm nice start. I like how she is being a bit tied up at the moment scene. So who has her and what is the guys intention.