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by emeraldfire84

person Robyn
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn. good. story.

Every chapter has me on the edge of my seat.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I guess he did not think of what she would do if he pushed her off the deep end.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! She's a crazy psychopathic bitch!!! There was this movie a long time ago that men even today fear....Cant remember the name of it but I bet any man you asked could tell you Ino is acting like the crazy bitch in that movie!!! LMFAO!!!!! Way to go Kakashi! She so deserved it and thank god for his morals and pride!! Now she's going all crazy with the tarnish his rep thing, she'll be lucky to live now!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD, you TEASE!! That was HOT!! I can't wait to see when they finally do do it! Keep up the great work!
person V
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo, Ino's mad... What will poor Kakashi do?? Heheh, nice chap, you're really pulling this off

UPDATE SOON!
person geeker
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh hehe. the plot thickens...much to kakashis dismay.
person Pilar
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story setup and the way it keeps building. Much better than them going at it in the first chapter. This makes the characters more interesting and I am actually starting to like Ino, she has good taste in men. Can't wait for more.
person mike
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I find it funny the way that you make kakashi out to be in the story. Wanting to obey his desires and and breaking the rules. I look forward to the coming chapters.
person kookai
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh heck no! please continue!! I wanna know what happens next :D your story's wonderful!
person rini
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot. wow kakashi sure has a lot of inner strenth keep writing please