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by emeraldfire84

person michelle
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh... how kinky... no tableclothes... need more updates to see what Ino has up her sleeves..
person Todd
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your style. Its not too concise and its definitely not to wordy. Every sentence seems appropriate and that gives the story a relaxed tone forcing the readers to be lost in the action of the text. I like the way you are building the story and it is definitely believeable. Kept my interest tight and bound. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...i like this fic...but one question...exactly how old r ino and kakashi? cuz i think that would be sick if kakashi is 35 n ino's 16....so tell in the nxt chap..k? well cant wait till u update!
person N.A. Zeno
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff! you are sucking me into this story more and more! please update soon
person V
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chap! Keep updating, really soon please!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting couple. Awesome story very well written! Well, I love all your stories. Please update soon!!
person demoneyeskyo
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh...escape again! damn that Kakashi! hopefully, Ino cook up some good plan cause i'm ready from some kakashixino smut! it was wonderfully done! i love every bit of it (evident by the fact that i read and comment every chapter). i REALLY REALLY can't wait for your next chapter, it's getting so hot!
person dragonlady sakura
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! I absolutely freaking love this story. It's hot! I never would have thought to pair these two together, but you make it definitely work. Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i read it ! oh oh oh i do!

Serenanna is so cool she didnt tell me a thing when i talked to her earlier.

well i look forward to the next chapter as well and i will try to give a better review then i promise
person ~*B*~
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
School papers!? Are you crazy?! No one likes writing school papers, hence why there is fanfiction to serve as an oh so wonderful distraction :D And your story is amazing. I've never seen an Ino/Kaka story before, but I believe you have taken a good approach to it. Keep those chapters coming!!