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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a departure from the pairings that I usually read, however I was pleasantly surprised that I liked it. I love that it wasn't mushy because I honestly don't think that would work for these two. Mostly I find Ino to be annoying in fanfics, this is a nice reprieve. By the time you got to the sex I think I was anticipating it as much as the characters. Every chapter after they begin fighting I was like, 'goddammit, when are they gonna fuck and get it over with!?'. Great ending, it wasn't overkill, just right.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed this story, it was hilarious and well written.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So worth the wait! Keep up the amazing work ^_^
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cold shower, anyone? That was amazingly sexy and hot and a perfect ending to this tension filled story. You are a great writer and I can't wait to read future postings.
~dragonlady sakura~
~dragonlady sakura~
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sequel...sequel...please......
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was by far something I never expected. You took the two least likely characters to get together and had them go at it in a realistic way. I'll admit I had my doubts, seeing the parring, by you dispelled them with you ability's, utterly and completely. Deserving many props, cookies, and or cakes.
I'll be looking forward to you other storeys.
alexa ebonscathe
I'll be looking forward to you other storeys.
alexa ebonscathe
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! wow the smut was perfect!!!! one of the best smut scenes i've ever read
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha.. Oh man! That smut was totally worth the wait! But anyway, I loved the other chapters, not just as a prologue to the sex, but as a well defined story. When do you say you'll be writing again? I can hardly wait.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very good ending to a very good story. I applaud you. Really, I don't like Kakashi X Ino romance, but the fact that you were able to get them to be in a story together as the main characters, have them have sex, put some awesome plot around it, and then make them only fuck-buddies at the end...well I'm in awe.
This is by far one of my favorite stories, true Porn with Plot.
This is by far one of my favorite stories, true Porn with Plot.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep, that ending was well worth the wait. I never considered the Kakashi/Ino pairing until now, and you have made me a fan. You did extremely well in portraying both their stubborn natures and I'm very glad to see that you didn't get mushy in the least with the actual action. This was an amazing read to the end, I'm sad to see it's over, but happy that it ended as well as it did. Congrats!