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Yikes, what I wouldn't give for the amount of reviews you have, LOL! Anyway, I had to join them and say that this is a very well written story with a surprisingly well-working plot (Gasp! Plot!) and you've been weaving it together very nicely. I have to compliment you on your grammar and writing style just because some people here wouldn't know what a paragraph was if it bit them in the ass. You're a great writer and I wouldn't worry too much about the space between updates. With the quality of your writing and the laughs and everything else that follow, you've got nothing to worry about. Take your time and make sure the next chapter is just as good, if not better, than this last one! Keep it up!

I was thinking it would have been more along the lines of Chidori in the study, or chasing her all across the village throwing everything he had into maiming her. pretty good though, didn't expect sakura to step in all of a sudden- I like it when stories aren't predictable, makes them more fun to read. Congrats, you get a nine out of ten.

lol poor Kakashi! Omg...that would just be horrible.

Anyways, keep up the great work!

two words: most excellent!

oh man, i was hoping for the bloodbath or at least a little sexual tension. oh well, you take what you can in times of need. two weeks huh? that's a very looong wait...well, hopefully, you will be back soon with another great update. this chapter was still wonderful even without the bloodbath. great job!

I knew some how you would find a way to make it ok for them to be together. I still think he should kill here. Wether or not it is appropriate or not isnt the issue. No one should ever be allowed to get away with what she did. And honestly, who would want to be with someone who had treated them so poorly just to get laid!? Sorry for the bad review. I really do love this story but to think of what Ino did pisses me off to no end. Kakashi deserves better and Ino's behavior gives women a bad rep.

update soon. =)

aww poor kakashi...hurry update...i got some ideas on how it will progress, but mostly fall inlove about to have sex but gets disrupted every time, so darn close lol but oh well. Continue plz!

*fidgets eagerly for the next post*

Wow, I think the thought of Kakashi/Ino has crossed my mind a few times, but your story has really convinced me. It's like I've been loitering about the shallows and you've just pitched me straight into the deep end without me realizing it. This is definitely one of those pair-defining stories-- well written, believably characterized, and very engaging. I am itching to find out how you'll finally get these two together, despite this little... "speed bump" *snickers* Honestly, I'm hoping there's still quite a bit left for this story, because I can see the possibility for a deeper relationship forming (since right now, it's mostly lust-based with the occasional burst of vindictive anger). Anyway, great job so far. Hope to see more soon :3