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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it. hurry please with chapter 10 =D
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was pleasantly surprised by this particular story. I wasn't very interested from the summary, but it snagged me well enough. I can't say it's the best thing I've ever read, but it's actually READABLE, which is more than I can say for a good three quarters of the fics here.
Actually, that was only my opinion for the first few chapters. The deeper I got into the fic, the better it seemed to get. I really appreciate the fact that you've written Kakashi mostly in character. I think this is actually the first Kakashi-centric fic I've ever read where he doesn't see his female interest and immediately hop in bed with her. You could use another couple of proof-reads though, especially on the last few chapters. I noticed quite a few typos, but for the most part they didn't jar me out of my reading too badly.
Over-all, I gotta say, this is damn good, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Actually, that was only my opinion for the first few chapters. The deeper I got into the fic, the better it seemed to get. I really appreciate the fact that you've written Kakashi mostly in character. I think this is actually the first Kakashi-centric fic I've ever read where he doesn't see his female interest and immediately hop in bed with her. You could use another couple of proof-reads though, especially on the last few chapters. I noticed quite a few typos, but for the most part they didn't jar me out of my reading too badly.
Over-all, I gotta say, this is damn good, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good bit of writing. Solid plot build-up, highly realistic character reactions and interactions, and congrats on making a very unlikely pairing highly entertaining to read. I haven't explored many Naruto fanfics yet, but this was by far the best one I've read up until now.
Great job, and update soon!
Great job, and update soon!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Oh man, Ino is SO going to get it now. Given how she's acted in this fic, I think it's about time she gets what's coming to her. Man, I feel horrible for Kakashi...
Keep up the great work J-Pop
Keep up the great work J-Pop
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really liked this story so far, and I hope Ino gets hers! But I didn't care for this one line:
"She had come up with a completely fabricated story that attacked the very essence of his masculinity."
This line strikes me as being just a tad homophobic. Being gay and being masculine are two different things in my opinion. Gay men are not necessarily more feminine than straight men. Also this line made Kakashi seem a little intolerant, which I doubt he would be.
"She had come up with a completely fabricated story that attacked the very essence of his masculinity."
This line strikes me as being just a tad homophobic. Being gay and being masculine are two different things in my opinion. Gay men are not necessarily more feminine than straight men. Also this line made Kakashi seem a little intolerant, which I doubt he would be.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i knew it! i knew she told everyone he was gay! ahahahaha! poor Kakashi. however, i didn't go as far as to predict that she would spread more then one rumor. good job, the infertile part was great. i can't wait to see what Kakashi would actually do to her. strangle her? make mad passionate love? who knows...
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hilarious chapter!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohoohoo! I'm lovin' this! I can't wait to see what happens next. And yes, it is impossible to think of Kakashi as an uke. Seme, yes, uke, NO! LOL! Keep up the great work!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely love this story. I agree with that one girl, no matter what gender he is into I would like to get my hands on him, lol. Keep up the great work!