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AWWWWW!!! NO MORE???? Oh well, when can we start petitioning for the sequel?

Tree leaves are green
And so are clover;
I am so sad that
This piece is over!

Let me know if I can help!

Smoochies and other mushy junk,
-X-

MORE!! PLEASE!?!?! i like your fanfic very much!

What!?!?! i was expecting another xxx type scene...and we don't even get to know the baby's name.....cmon one more...

VII

Lol, sweet ending. Well deserved. Damned council. I liked it very much.

Nice. i like this. It was very sweet. I'm gonna go to sleep now. I've had an overload of SasuNaru for the day. Tight work.

i loved it it was funny!

A great ending for a great fic! I loved the fact that Sasuke wrote this one...although I think he might have got some help from Naruto! LOL This was just great It was sweet and funny. Thanks for writing and sharing it! You're awesome!

Thanks for writing this, this fic was really cute and I liked all the little rhymes you came up with. It made my day a little better. I like your ideas and plots for most of your fics and have become a fan. However, I do have a comment: sometimes I find small grammatical and spelling errors and it annoys me because it keeps your good fics from being flawless. Maybe you should look into getting a beta or just proofread before you post the fics up. I'm sure that it would make your fans' reading experience more enjoyable. Thanks again and please keep your fics coming.

Pffft! That was funny!! Had me snickering. You're quite talented with those Roses are Red rhymes!! Well done! The only thing that bothered me was the use of the word "ravenette", because words with the ending -ette are normally reserved to mean either little or female, so I kept imagining a tiny female Sasuke. The twist at the end, very cute!! Good story!

This was a really sweet little story. Thank you for sharing it.