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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know you said English wasn't your first language, but I think you're doing a super job (and it takes guts and effort to write in your non-native language -- I'm really impressed)!
I really like how you word certain parts of the story (what I've read so far -- I'm hoping to have more time to read on later!), and apart from the occasional spelling or verb-conjugation/tense mix-up (which even native English-speakers do), I find it reads very well.
It took me a few chapters to realise that sometimes, the one-shots aren't related to each other. It is really neat to see the different character-traits that you bring out in each chapter. You portrayed a longing-Naruto, innocent-Sakura, and possessive-Sasuke really, really well.
Congratulations on such a good job! *hoping to be able to read more later!*
I really like how you word certain parts of the story (what I've read so far -- I'm hoping to have more time to read on later!), and apart from the occasional spelling or verb-conjugation/tense mix-up (which even native English-speakers do), I find it reads very well.
It took me a few chapters to realise that sometimes, the one-shots aren't related to each other. It is really neat to see the different character-traits that you bring out in each chapter. You portrayed a longing-Naruto, innocent-Sakura, and possessive-Sasuke really, really well.
Congratulations on such a good job! *hoping to be able to read more later!*
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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha, Sakura and her bunshin-abuse of power. :D
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story
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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have an amazing grasp of the English language! (Not easy for someone who's learning it as a language other than their first!) Not only that, but your imagination and heart truly gives these stories so much life. I truly enjoy reading these, and I'm constantly finding myself coming back and re-reading them. Thank you for writing so many excellent stories!
Peace,
~Aimereta
Peace,
~Aimereta
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished reading the anthology of Sasu/Saku oneshots you've written and am very impressed. I hope you continue to write and share your work with us. Thank you for a good read.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the review!
'Anthology' is an AWESOME series. I really do mean that. I've been a fan for a long time! I just recently started writing for SasuSaku, so I'm really thankful for the good review. After all, it's authors like you that made me such a huge superfan of SasuSaku fanfiction.
xoxo
sammy_sakura
'Anthology' is an AWESOME series. I really do mean that. I've been a fan for a long time! I just recently started writing for SasuSaku, so I'm really thankful for the good review. After all, it's authors like you that made me such a huge superfan of SasuSaku fanfiction.
xoxo
sammy_sakura
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree, our avenger does indeed deserve a happy ending.
Sasuke never said 'I love you' to Sakura...but you are right, he doesn't need to.
I'm new to this site, I decided to upgrade from fanfiction.net...and....this is
the first story I read, and reviewed here. Good Job. Thanks for writing, I hightly enjoyed it.
-YS
Sasuke never said 'I love you' to Sakura...but you are right, he doesn't need to.
I'm new to this site, I decided to upgrade from fanfiction.net...and....this is
the first story I read, and reviewed here. Good Job. Thanks for writing, I hightly enjoyed it.
-YS
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I deffinitely think you should turn the Possession Side stories into a real fic, it has a great base for a lenghty story that I would love to read. The other stories were very good as well, a great way to spend my time, thank you.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was fantastic! This story is something original, something pefect!
And as for being Italian, your gramma was perfect ;D I only spotted about 3 small mistakes, so i thought it was great!
Well done on a great story! xx
And as for being Italian, your gramma was perfect ;D I only spotted about 3 small mistakes, so i thought it was great!
Well done on a great story! xx
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe:) I read the entire story on FF.net! I love it, though you have to finish it soon on FF.net cause I likes that one;) Good Work!!!