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Part 2 of Alive: Sakura is most probably PREGNANT! Isn't she? (n_n)v

First I would like to say how much it amazes me that an author whose second language is english can write something so powerful and more entertaining than most people that speak English as their first language. I can't tell you how talented and accomplished you really are and for someone who is so young. I for one have to admit that I am not a Sasuke lover. Now before you throw something at me I also wanted to say that after reading these incredible one-shots I am now a SasuSaku fan. I can tell that you put your whole heart and soul into writing. It comes across as a real passion for you. I would also like to point out that even though all of your work is amazing I believe you tend to do better writing the third person dark fics. The Smell of Sex and Pain were my two favorites. When you write those your real talent shows in my eyes. You write everything I want to read about. From Sasuke being possessive over Sakura by always saying "mine" to the secret obsession that Naruto has with Sakura tho he's with Hinata. I like Hinata don't get me wrong, but I just can't seem to get into the NaruHina thing as much as NaruSaka. Now I'm rambling but, I want you to know that I look forward to reading anything you have to offer. Please continue to update! And I would love nothing more than to see you write a longer fic. One containing lots of loooooong chapters and that lemony goodness of Sasuke and Sakura.

I must congratulations on your Sasuke & Sakura Anthology. I'm such a fan of them and really wish there were more fics about them on this site. My fav. Fic by far is "Panty Thief"! Where you watching/reading "Ranma 1/2" recently? Because it sounds like Happosai has gotten loose in Konoha! I really hope that you will go back and write the other couples lemons. I would really like to read them. Good job!

OMG!!! I LOOOVE THIS STORY! AND THAT SONG THAT U HAVE (THE SMELL OF SEX) SEEMS LIKE IT WOULD BE A GOOD ONE, DEFFINATELY GONNA CHECK IT OUT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF UR STUFF!

EF

another chapter!!

really good

what's happening?

good good i wonder is naruto gonna kill em? you ask for reviews i give em even if it is abit late

I like most of this... EXCEPT the part where he was trying to rape Ino. The best friend of his girlfriend? Love interest? That's just wrong on so many levels... *cries*

BTW, "slain" is the past participle of "slay" (which is present tense; the past tense is "slew"). I believe you want the singular form of the present tense, which is "slays", i.e. "He has no mercy, he *slays* them!", and "You don’t kill, you massacre, you *slay*". (Between the asterisks are the corrections.)

Slain (past participle) is used like this: the slain deer was slung over his shoulder; the men who have been slain. (Not from your fic; just random examples I'm giving)

Hope this helps. :)

p/s: Really? You don't hate Karin? Do you know that in the latest chapter (365), she was going to drug Suigetsu and Juugo, so she could RAVAGE Sasuke like crazy (while he was badly injured and recovering from his wounds)? You really don't find this type of behaviour really, really repulsive?

that one was sweet.
keep writing because i really enjoy your stories

Ooh! Just realized this would be a three-parter. Good for you! SasuSaku definitely deserves a nice HEA ending here. ^_^