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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
It´s just awesome!!!!!!
You´re a great writer, I love the sasu/saku pairing, it´s my favorite couple, please keep doing fics,
I really love your stories, so diferent between them, what else can I say? n.n
Kisses from a mexican fan =D
It´s just awesome!!!!!!
You´re a great writer, I love the sasu/saku pairing, it´s my favorite couple, please keep doing fics,
I really love your stories, so diferent between them, what else can I say? n.n
Kisses from a mexican fan =D
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I'm normally not a SasuSaku fan. But, great writing keeps me interested! You're doing very well even if English is not your first language. Some parts are a little awkward, but not enough to distract. (You're actually doing better than some of the native speakers' stories I've read). Couldn't help but notice that 'Alive' is a trilogy so I'm ANXIOUSLY awaiting parts 2 and 3. I'm not much of a Karin fan so I'm glad she got an earful and an eyeful. ^__^ Can't wait to read more! Hugs & Kisses!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 was great! I love it! ^__^ Although, I gotta say Sai got a little OOC, ya know, trying to rape Sakura like that, all of a sudden... Still, it was a nice LONG one shot! Squee!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A lemon set after the time skip! This could almost be turned into a doujin, really. :) My only lament is that the actual lemony part was kinda short, and the line about the "flaming passion he had felt when he had fought with Naruto" was just so gay... but ironically as a result, rather like the manga. XD
Hmm... would you kindly write more SasuSaku lemon after the time skip? Pretty please?
Hmm... would you kindly write more SasuSaku lemon after the time skip? Pretty please?
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i liked this one very much its bitter sweet but oh so good! keep it up i check this site only for you fic!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These were all so very cute! And for English not being your first language there were very little mistakes, and the ones that were there weren't anything that disrupted the flows. Great job! I hope you do more; I enjoyed every one!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome.
your english is really good, too
your english is really good, too
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love your chapters and can’t wait to read more!!!!!!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! I am so happy you updated, I love this fic and it is nice to see a comedic chapter in it. You don't dislike the Itachi/Sakura thing? It kinda freaks me out, but each to his own I guess. Although what is with all the Kakashi/Sakura fic's? Update again please!!!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For someone who doesn't have English as a native tongue (or so I assume), you're a damn good writer.
I mean fucking good. Seriously.
I mean fucking good. Seriously.