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omg! yay!!! finally someone else thinks aff needs more sasusaku! thanks so much for writing it! i would write it too if i had a computer, but i only get to use my friends when i go over so oh well. love the possesive sasuke! only i hope he realizes that he loves sakura. can't wait to read part 2!!

I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!

i love the way you set up your one-shots collection and I love your stuff on fanfiction.net.... i also adore the way you can portray SasSak in many diffrent styles, sometimes Sasuke is really a bastard and sometimes he's just crazy possessive and sometimes he really does love Sakura and others she is merely his tool. It's impressive, especially since english isn't your first language. (when i try to write in spanish it always seems repetitive and rough.) so you're truly gifted if you can write in english with style. i also agree that no one on this sight reviews, and its depressing. but hey, what can we do about it. keep up the good work!

ps. the only time I ever think that Naruto Hinata is good is the way you've done it here. I just can't see naruto going to hinata with no feelings for Sakura. he spent most of his life being obsessed with her! personally i think hinata is... pathetic and an insult to woman everywhere. (she faints in the presense of the man she has a thing for... that is very 18th century) So i was really happy to see someone take a realistic take on the pairing. xoxox

*grins*
this is how i'd picture a relationship between them.
awesome stories

very well written chapters. Just got into Naruto and became a saksuke fan. Hard to find fanfics well written about them. Thought i'd give this ago, and voilà it was great. You kept the behaviour of both characters as much as a fanfic would do.

well done.

how long do you plan to write? chapter-wise.

Wow, I really like this series. Horny Sasuke makes me laugh. XD Please write more SasuSaku lemons! ^_^

THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME, and ur right their r not enough saskue and sakura pairings in the great wide world of fan fiction. i really admire ure writing style, and if u could id like u to read my story all ALL ALONG its my first ever fanfiction and it is a naruto X hinata fic i would really appreciate ure input seeing as ure work is so good. honestly one of the best sakura and sasuke fics ive ever read!!!!!!! keep it up cause i cant wait to read more

lots of love

and long live sakura and sasuke parings LOL XD

I understand your disappointment in reviews given the number of hits. I have about 1800 hits and only four reveiws. So I thought Id give you a piece of my mind. I really loved this story. It contained the presonality of Sasuke intact while giving him added scope by letting him finally feel for Sakura and be ok with his weakness for her. It was great, especially that last chapter. Because he lusted after her with such.......cant find the word Im thinking of.....ok lustfullness...good enough I guess......but he could also say he loved her and feel love for her. It wasnt just about sex and it wasnt a mushy romantic all feeling Sasuke story either. I hate those. Anyway...great story, will you be adding more or was it complete, I didnt look to see.

Wow! You did a great job in portraying these character. They were believable as were there interactions. More over your english is better than many of the native speaker writing so Kudos to you. I love the tension and angst in your story that never overwelmed the characters. I think this may be more true of them than other portrayals. You are a very gifted writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.

^^ I'm liking your work and I do agree, there are not enough Sasu/Saku stories out there, or at least here, on AFF.

~Stares at view:review counts~ I agree, lots of views, no reviews T_T