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March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review the fics on this site... I keep to the shadows, ashamed of myself for looking at them. But this one is different. This has a plot, and is fairly unique in what I have dared to read. Where to begin.....
Your name interests me... the homonym of wrathchild... a child born of rape... The potential of something good coming from one of the vilest acts humanity can conceive of. I have seen, on the normal fanfiction site and this one, fics that involve naruto being raped in the past and traumatized, ones where a girl is the one traumatized and he takes care of her... in one case I saw the woman be a fellow jinchuuriki who's seal transferred the bijuu to her wrathchild at birth, killing her and leaving naruto to take care of her baby. There is something about these stories that touches closer to home for those that read them. When I think of some of the three top mangas/animes; Naruto, Bleach, and One Piece, I see a similarity... You see, out of those three, I feel that OP has the strongest "spirit," the greatest ability to captivate the reader and make them feel like they are really there. Naruto has such a large amount of characters that little back story is available on them. Bleach makes it seem like death isn't as sad, merely a transition. But One Piece.... The torture that happens there; the injustice, cruelty, slavery... The harshness of the real world. That is what I see in this fic. It calls out to us and makes us want to read till the end, hoping to find a happy ending. Because a part of us believes that if this story can have a happy outcome from such a terrible event, maybe we can get through the hardships in our lives as well.
Your name interests me... the homonym of wrathchild... a child born of rape... The potential of something good coming from one of the vilest acts humanity can conceive of. I have seen, on the normal fanfiction site and this one, fics that involve naruto being raped in the past and traumatized, ones where a girl is the one traumatized and he takes care of her... in one case I saw the woman be a fellow jinchuuriki who's seal transferred the bijuu to her wrathchild at birth, killing her and leaving naruto to take care of her baby. There is something about these stories that touches closer to home for those that read them. When I think of some of the three top mangas/animes; Naruto, Bleach, and One Piece, I see a similarity... You see, out of those three, I feel that OP has the strongest "spirit," the greatest ability to captivate the reader and make them feel like they are really there. Naruto has such a large amount of characters that little back story is available on them. Bleach makes it seem like death isn't as sad, merely a transition. But One Piece.... The torture that happens there; the injustice, cruelty, slavery... The harshness of the real world. That is what I see in this fic. It calls out to us and makes us want to read till the end, hoping to find a happy ending. Because a part of us believes that if this story can have a happy outcome from such a terrible event, maybe we can get through the hardships in our lives as well.
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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its so hard trying go deal with this sorta trauma. Im glad Ino has good friends and good help.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's great that you've updated. Good stuff here.
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you have Inoichi tell the Hokage that Ino and Naruto need to go to consoling. It could be something that help or hurts them. By telling Tsuande she can reason with Naruto why he has to go. If he will not go willing then at least go for Ino's. Besides it might make him a better Hokage. I mean can you see the Hokage sending on seductive missions in his sexy justu henge. Well I hope you update soon.
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOw. Quick update! Its like three years of nothing, than BAM - two updates in a week. Rock on! lol
Good chapter. Keep up the great work!
Good chapter. Keep up the great work!
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol I can't criticize on your "lazy-fuck" position. I myself procrastinate the hell out of everything. However, despite it being three years (God, have I really been reading crap on this site for three years already? Damn!) I still remembered your story from way back when enough to go "holy shit, is that the same story... updated???" when I say it posted. Crazy right?
However, I suppose this is just an powerful reminder of how fantastic I've always thought this story was and how well written. Actually, you may not be aware of this, but I believe someone else took the idea of this story and wrote a plot similar to yours in homage of yours. She/he even linked back to this story for the credit.
Ok, I'm rambling. Personally I'm thrilled you decided to continue this. The chapter was great. Hopefully I'll still be around for the eventual update of chapter 8! :D
Keep up the great work and welcome back!
However, I suppose this is just an powerful reminder of how fantastic I've always thought this story was and how well written. Actually, you may not be aware of this, but I believe someone else took the idea of this story and wrote a plot similar to yours in homage of yours. She/he even linked back to this story for the credit.
Ok, I'm rambling. Personally I'm thrilled you decided to continue this. The chapter was great. Hopefully I'll still be around for the eventual update of chapter 8! :D
Keep up the great work and welcome back!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story. Really well written with a great story, I think. Although it's been a LONG time since you last updated, I hope to see more.
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good history
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good I hope you will update soon.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this is so cool story. I just found it cause I dont go here much often. But it´s really goo. I hope the muse bugger will come to U soon.