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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was pretty good heck the next step you should have them all move in together anyways keep up the goodwork and update soon PLEASE
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic.
Allow me to clarify: its horrific, upsetting, and deeply touching. Extremely well written. Reading about rape is never a good time, but the raw emotions caputred in the story make it well worth the read.
Allow me to clarify: its horrific, upsetting, and deeply touching. Extremely well written. Reading about rape is never a good time, but the raw emotions caputred in the story make it well worth the read.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i am glad i am reading this. not sure what you meant about not being able to write sad things lately. this chapter wasn't really too sad. naruto was a little depressed for having sex but compared to the other chapters this was downright sunny. guessing sakura will be talking to ino about her and naruto having sex and then ino will tell sakura about her feelings towards him. or something like that. anyway i really hope you are able to continue this story, even if you can't update too often.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you back. Keep up the great work and I think your right, about a couple of chapters would be good for the threesome scene. I hope Ino gets better.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update, i'm glad to see you didn't drop the story like many other good stories i've seen.
Keep this up
Keep this up
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I officially love this story. I Know there's this thing called real life that some strange people have, but do what you can to get more out.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
also, I would like to add that should you decide, for whatever reason, not to continue the story, please let us know. The only thing worse than having a good story get dropped is waiting for months for an update that will never happen.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but I have a feeling that this story will not be finished since most of the authr here like to start stories but never finish them
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just going through all of the stories i have been waiting to update and i noticed you still have not updated this story for 2 weeks, The story is well written and i would love to see more of it.
Please update as soon as you can
This is a Great story
Please update as soon as you can
This is a Great story
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update this anytime soon? Its to good a story to leave hanging. Well written.