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for Nothing is Ok

by wrathchylde

schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering were you going to update anytime soon its an ok story so far but the rape part other than that it was good so when are you going to update
person ri100014
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really am addicted to this piece. I'm back, again, to reread and I think, I'm not too sure but I think so, that chapter four was a new addition. Because I can't see myself missing something as relevant and overwhelming as that. My God. Naruto... I just don't know what to say to the boy. Other than, please, talk to someone about it, let it out and don't just think its your responsibility to keep it secret. Don't think its a weakness, for it to have happened to you. Its that, it happened to you. You had no say, you were the innocent, of that disgusting, vile and horrible act that was done to you. Don't try and make it your fault, because it couldn't be further from it. He needs to heal as much as Ino. I know he'll deny it though, saying she's the victim, what happened to him is in the past, but its not. It still hurts. Please update as soon as you can.

Till next time... adios.
person darnod
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
been reading it and enjoying it so far. not exactly the subject but the pain and dealing with it. doing a great job.

as a guy i really don't know if i could be ready to have sex right after those images popped into my brain. it would be difficult to be sure. other then that good fic. want to read more.
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I think this story is really good it kinda sucked that Ino or anybody to get raped oh well this is a really good story and I cann`t wait till you update again so when will Ino get out and what will she do now aftershe gets out since she has taken to Naruto for support I doubt she will be able to sleep i her own room without naruto near her anyways update real soon and I mean soon please
person Kilroy
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of your storys, I have to say you have some real talent for writing. Very good and hope to see updats to this one and "Telling Eyes"
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Chapter 5 is pure gold. Keep the work coming, I can't wait to see how this ends.
person Zendura
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! The lemon came out great don't worry about it.
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the lemon (and of course, the rest of the chapter). I'm guessing that, despite this little love session, since the story is categorized as a Threesome, Ino will get some loving too, as she's now very attached to Naruto. It helps that the series doesn't officially established polygamy as being illegal in Leaf. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon. Cheers!
person wildkit
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing author, and I cant wait to read the next chapters. Keep up the good work. =^_^=
person ri100014
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. I'll be honest with you, I overlooked the lemon for now, really because you're story is more to my interest than the sex. And with the pain Naruto's feeling right now, coupled with some of my own in real life, I just feel a strange urge to let them have some privacy (yeah, weird I know). I'll definitely come back to it, some time, to enjoy how well it's written, with my tongue out like the pervert I am at times, but just not right now. I don't know if Sakura knows what Ino did to Naruto, that is a big catch in this story so far. Its something that will be a conflicting topic between them. Also Naruto, by everything you've said, hasn't opened up to Sakura about his own past trama. Another big catch. I can't wait to see how you work those out and how you plan to have them together. Given the commitment and love you've displayed between Naruto/Sakura, it will be difficult. I can see it happening, though, in all honesty. Keep up the good writing, will be checking in to see what happens next.

Till next time... adios.