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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done... I can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far so please keep up the great work and give the muse a chocolate bar to soothe the frustrations. I hope Naruto shares his past with Ino and Sakura, it will be a great way to help Ino. I know Sakura won't get jealous of her boyfriend and best friend during this hard time. I hope Ino recovers from this, but since Naruto's involved that's a given. Keep the great work, Ja ne.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope Ino doesn't try to help Naruto with those memories she put in his head while he's sleeping. You never know what "Inner Demons" a person has. But if she does she might learn a few things about handling this trauma from a blonde headed loudmouth we all love. Well still keep up the great work and don't give up. BELIEVE IT!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D-A-M-N.... I honestly don't know what to say that hasn't alreay been said. The subject matter is darker then most I've found lately and the way you handle it is just incredible. I'm really enjoying the story thus far end look forward to seeing how things unfold. You are a truly gifted writer and I encourage you to complete what has to be a difficult story to write.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good lemon I enjoyed it plus it was naru/saku my favorite pairing can't wait for you next chapter.
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue the story, interesting so far.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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You must complete this. There....are no words to describe what I've read.
Only that it must be finished. You cannot let this die. This....is too good.
You must complete this. There....are no words to describe what I've read.
Only that it must be finished. You cannot let this die. This....is too good.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
enjoying this story a lot. not sure how sakura can remain involved though. i can see her trying to console ino but that is the limit that i can see of her involvement. please keep this up. way too few hetero stories on here. and way way too few threesomes.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story (it's on my Faves list on FF.net, b/c there isn't a Faves list here, the Admin-baka). Ino's dad's name is Inoichi. I don't know why some people get it wrong; it seems no one can cross-reference the name to check for accuracy when they search for bios. Again, I love this fic: A favorite pairing, and well written.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that, as long as your writings are done with heart in them, it should never matter how short they are. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon.