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You cant complain that nobody reviews, because i made an account specifically because I wanted to review this story. I really dont have a lot to say, but that was impressive. Not many people can pull off something like either Ino or Naruto's rape scene. It was hard to read, but im actually glad for that. This should never be something easy to take. For the same reason, it's probably a good sign that you found writing this somewhat draining. Anyway, i liked it. I'm interested to see where it goes.

you have a gift for writing and i sincerly hope you keep this up, the story is a little dark but it is well written and thus a good read

When I wrote the previous review, I fleetingly thought that perhaps you could use a similiar path like this, where Naruto can empathize with Ino's nightmare. I wasn't sure if you'd particularily agree with its too frequently overlooked circumstances though. Its usually something that masculine pride and public image silently pushes aside. Its nice to see you didn't. Its not good for Naruto to punish himself with her memory though. His overwhelming guilt and helplessness is already pressing down on him enough, adding this just continues to eat away at him. ..... But we both know who were talking about here. Its amazing Naruto hasn't experienced a psychotic induced massacre the likes of which would put Gaara to shame and the Kyuubi a bit jealous. Hopefully he won't try slinking this weight over his shoulder along with everything else forever though. It's just not healthy.

Till next time... adios.

Looks promising, a serious plot with a twist.
I'm curious what you'll make of it, good work so far.

Hope you continue this. One thing I have to mention though, while Naruto has never felt the humiliation and terror of being molested, he has felt torture and brutuality. Remember who he is, the bastard demon-child. The village tried to rip his innocence from him at a young age. While this is not cosidered "canon" as its never been shown, I am a firm supporter of Naruto's abusive childhood. Its one of the things that entrenches me to his character. So when Ino, in her borderline terror, transfered her experience into him, watch out. She might get more than she bargained for. For she connected with someone who knows pain intimately.

Till next time... adios.

Don't even sweat the low reviews people are just lazy. I like the story hope you continue it. Good idea with the whole Ino family jutsu thing being used on Naruto to make him feel her pain. Kind of over the top for her to use it on him but it's understandable. Well hope to see more of this story.

wow that is all i can say...

a very good second chapter, i look forward to seeing more from you

Nice story you have going so far though I feel bad for Ino. Anyway longer chapters would be welcome. Also keep updating as much as you can. I can't wait to see the plot unfold.

Okay, that last bit was an interesting twist. With all the horrors Naruto's experienced in his life, I wonder how he'll take it? Update soon!