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for Dream Girl

by DevilnBlue

person Teelavan
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but its so sad...I don't like Naruto's mom. I like the interaction between the Sand siblings and Naruto but I don't like how you made Haku, thats my favorite character of all time. Will Zabuza appear?
person Kerrisa
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Sulks* I'm so mad at Naruto's mother right. I wish Itachi had returned immediately with social services and took Naruto away!! But No. She got away to hurt him some more, and Sasuke's upset with Naruto and ahhhhh! Tis all falling apart! Graahh that woamn has me so angry I'm surprised Itachi didn't tear her a new one when they "conversating." And those horrible people who let Keiko get away with it! Darn you all I hope your jobs are at high risk! *Shakes fist* I want to sulk more, but I'm going to start reading Promise and hope it will cheer me up some! At least distract me from wanting to yell at Keiko for utterly failing at being a mother. I need to read the next chapter of this fic to find out what happens to Naruto D= I don't want him to lose his identity.. =( XOXOXs
person Akaku
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg. Poor Naruto. His mother has reallly gone off the deep. I really hope she comes to her sentences soon. Itachi really does push things too far!!!! *angrily pouts* poor saskue. His little heart has been hurt but not broken. If only he could see Naruto again...Im sure things would be better. That is if Naruto doesnt try to kill himself. well wonderfully written. It really captured me. I cant wait for the rest of the story.
person labooboo93
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories, fanfiction or not, I have ever read.
The idea is so great and the execution is just fabulous.
I really hope you finish it, because it's just spectacular and I can;'t wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and can tall that you hvae clearly put a lot of thought into it i hope that you would keep wrighting an update soon
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what happen to next. did they get the whole pay off that my son is died bit switch or will it still cause a problem to little Naruto-kun in the future.
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be good to continue the story, even if you get no reviews. If you are enjoying writing it, you should keep at it. I'll do my best to keep up with it and review as often as I can, I promise. I think you would be making a mistake if you stopped writing it now. Anyway, I am enjoying it thus far. Please update soon.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see you continue this story. The story line is unique and I have yet to see one even nearly similar.

person Anon
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I like this story ^^
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I really like where it's going and you stopped at a very good spot....please do it for theo nes who do read your stories...sometimes i don't have time to review and i rush through the chapters....so sorry about that.