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thanks for the new chap. i glad to see your witer's block on this story is cured. while i was reading you put iruka as sasuke's brother instead of itachi. it confused me for a minute because i was like when did iruka become an uchiha. other then that great chapter. i was glad that someone now knows the rini is really naruto although i am sad that the first person to find out was itachi instead of sasuke but i think you might have a reason for that so i'll just wait and see.

heh. i kind of like this fanfiction. the plot goes around pretty smoothly and your grammar is good too (which is the best), and the plot is singular too (though, I don't know if you had the idea reading "Global Garden", but it's actually starting the same way, inverted, but i know your story will move into a completely different way).

soo, i want to see how this developes. i know you said this shouldn't have advanced from the first chapter, but it has potential and i wish to see how you'll be able to work it out.

thanks for posting this fic, and i hope in a new update as soon as you feel like it. ^^

SOY/MF/Ceph

Well, I for one just found this story, and I love it. I can't stand when people don't read a story and review it. I mean, seriously. This story is even oppen to the public to review, so there's no excuse.

Anyway, like I said, I love this story, so if you only write for the readers, you can always write for me.

Awesome! keep up the good work! A very developed and deep story you have going here. I like it.

Dude, don't worry too much about other peoples negative opinions. The content of your story is entirely up to you and btw I must say that I for one very much liked the fact that you didn't dumb down the kids. I do remember being that age very well and I know exactly how complicated my thought process was. People don't tend to give children nearly enough credit. You right very well and I've found this story extremely interesting. Great job! I rather hope you'll continue. (of course that's up to you to) Hugs and Squishes!

Aw.. come on... dont stop writting! Please~~~ They finally actually come in contact with each other already! I really wanna know how Sasuke is gonna take things in the future.. and i definately wanna see the Naruto's life progress for the better... It will right? somewhere..

Awe!! Assassins_Kiss-sama!! Can i call you Kiss-sama? You weren't kidding, that was really sad =( but on the flip slide is was really awesome. I'm proud of Naruto getting back in there and doing damage to Mizuki! Those freaking child molesters >_< Itachi shoulda shot at their groins! Woulda served them rignt >=/ i love a story that can get you involved, make ya wanna scream at the characters or grab them up so you can protect them in your arms. Your story does this. It already has such sad undertones, with the los on RIni and his Dad, and his not all there mother, i really feel for Naruto =( Now that he's met with Itachi and Sasuke i'm hoping he'll get some more rays of sun light in his life so he can be genuinely happy. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to more updates =D!!

OMG! Itachi kicks ass man.
I love your writing :)

Thank goodness. Sasuke and Itachi both showed up. I'm glad Naruto and Sasuke are both going to be okay. Please continue!!

i am so glad that naruto was not raped i am tired of the people who seem to always be trying to tag naruto's "ass"ets. i am wondering if you are going to have them seperate for a number of years and meet again and he finds out that naruto is a boy. or are you going to have sasuke find out right away. i can't wait to see the next chapter and find out.