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for Dream Girl

by DevilnBlue

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke makes it in time! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person dut
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. its so sad.. but so meaningfull naruto loves his mother so much... Well good to hear that Sasike and Naruto is gonna meet in the next chapter! yay
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad chapter - I felt so bad for Naruto. Can't wait for him to meet Sasuke though, and see where you are planning for this to go. :)
person skyblue
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chpt 1 is so sad...
person dutsada
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it althought its a little angsty at the moment but things will get a bit better for Naruto later ne? More more please~
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was scary and beautiful, hauntingly ethereal and eerily believable. makes me feel sorry for both Naruto and his mother, even if i do kinda wanna run in there and kidnap the boy away. still, theres something inside me that finds the idea of Naruto-whose-a-girl-but-not perversly appealing, i can just imagine sasuke's face when he unwrapps the package, though i don't know whether he'd be excited or scared by that ^.^
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why is his mother so obsessed with Rini? Is it because she loved her more than she loved Naruto or is i because Naruto reminds her of their father so she pretends it's Rini so she won't have to remember? It's all so confusing but intriguing to me. I really like this story and hope you update quicker...and sooner.

Ki`Tara
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!!! He has to live with a crazy mother and can't be his real self. :(
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that's sooo sad. I hope it gets better for him! I can think of a thousand and one ways this story will progress but I can't wait to read it from you.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Naruto!!! It must hurt him to have his mother wanting it to be his sister that survived. And now he has to pretend to be her. :( Love this story so far. :)