rate_review Reviews

CUUUTE! Please update soon! =)

it's an interesting start. its decently written and i'm wondering whats going to happen next. i do advise you though, to not use any japanese words. it'd be fine if it were to quote an inside joke. like 'teme' and 'dobe' and 'ero-sennen'. I dispise it when authors use words like nani and hajimemashite etc etc etc. its obvious that you do not know japanese fluently. i mean if you can, that's fine, but either stuck to full japanese or full english. (with the exception of those inside jokes, like "iruka-sensei".)

most of us arent japanese and wont know what they mean. you can use both to help us understand but that's just a bother for everyone. the worst is when you use all these japanese phrases and list their definitions at the way bottom.

this is just a complaint. i just think it's annoying. do what you want.

omg! this is so sweet and it would totally rock my socks if this is gonna end up IruNaru in the end. it's one of my fave rare pairings and it would totally make my month to read about it. either way, i'm sticking around till the end of this. looking foward to your next update.

oh, he is SO sitting there buck nekkid, right? aw, that would be cute... anyway, this is looking cute so far!!~

Oh kawaii ne ne update will ya' cuz' I love it, too bad you did a cliffhanger though-_-

This is so cute! Can't wait for your next update.

WOW! what a wonderful story, please continue. ^-^

what what did he see aww plz next chapter soon hurry thanks u this story is interesting by the way lol