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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic story. i like that Sasuke is a half cat demon. That was cute. Kakashi has a lot to answer for. He brings trouble on his own head. ^_^ so much fun. I love this story a lot.
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was totally unexpected, I never thought that Sasuke would be a bakeneko and I never thought he would be jealous over Kakashi of all things. That's a nice parallel between Sasuke and Naruto, them being very protective over their caretakers, I wonder how they will feel if Kakashi and Iruka ever have a relationship. I too was hoping that they would be instant friends but that would have been too easy and their little fight was cute and funny at the same time. I also liked how in character Sasuke was, he can be really nasty but when it comes to his brother or anyone he really cares about he can be extremely vulnerable and insecure. How could Sasuke not see Naruto's cuteness? He was obviously blinded by jealousy but I hope he comes to see what everyone else does. Good little chapter can't wait to read more.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so cute. naru chan is so cute. he makes mes wanna cuddle him and smother him with kisses. hahaha i lve that kakashi's name is cyclops; it suits him. iruka and naru r so cute together. i can't wait to see naruto and sasuke interact, that should be a blast. keep writing its awesome, can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this, I am so glad that Sasuke has made his appearance in the story. I think that Naruto is just too cute for words in this and his relationships with everyone while different are still the same. His relationships in particular with Kakashi, Iruka and the Third are the best ones and kind of the only ones that are prominent but that doesn't matter to the point I was making. Naruto and Kakasho's relationship especially is sweet in a funny way, I love the nicknames that they picked for each other, they are very telling about what they really feel about the others appearance and personality. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what Naruto's reaction will be to Sasuke insulting him the very first time they meet.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! It's refreshing to read such a well written and original story! and I love Kakashi's nickname for Naruto, Goldilocks! It just seems so fitting for some reason! :) i look forward to the next installment.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, my dear. I just want to let you know that your fics are great and I'm sorry to hear that they weren't receiving the attention the attention that they greatly deserve. Those of us that have read your stories are eagerly awaiting your next update(s). I, personally, have a book that I use to keep track of my favorite fics on this site. 4 of your fics are already in there and even though 2 of them haven't been touch in over 3 months I refuse to take them out because the story was that good.
Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.
~Devious
p.s. i have never seen a more adorable naru than the one you've created in this fic. that combined with the long chapters make this a perfect sit down, giggle & awww fic. i especially love the fact that you had naru bare his goodies to the world to prove that he is not a girl. that was just too hilarious.
Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.
~Devious
p.s. i have never seen a more adorable naru than the one you've created in this fic. that combined with the long chapters make this a perfect sit down, giggle & awww fic. i especially love the fact that you had naru bare his goodies to the world to prove that he is not a girl. that was just too hilarious.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa the next chapter will be interesting. I can't wait to see how cutey Naruto will react to Sasuke who seems to be a total opposite of him. I've been wondering at the pairing the whole time and I still can't determine who Naruto will end up with -_- lol great story! By the way how old is Iruka and Naruto? Are their age gap too huge to be together when Naru grows up?
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is so cute! This story is very well written! And Sasuke, at last!! I just can't wait to read more!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY! Iruka is feeling shy already but poor Naruto~~~ i bet he felt abandoned! I can't wait to find out how Iruka is gonna treat him later... moreover, Sasuke, what on earth is he approaching Naruto for?! Thanks for the update... hope the next one will be up soon~~~~