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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this chapter. I probably already said this in a previous review but the main thing that makes this story as good as it is, is the conversations Naruto has with the people around him. In this chaper I found the conversation and events with Naruto and Kakashi quite amusing. I like the way that they interact with each other and I hope there are more of those moments. I also like the nickname Goldilocks for Naru with his golden blonde hair and mischief attitude it seems to fit him. Oddly enough whenever Kakashi calls him that I picture Naruto with a curly blonde wig on his head and a pink dress. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! I love that you put the Kitsune lore in the story!! This is awesome. It just ads so much perfection to an already awesome story. =^^=
Can't wait for the next update! I love this story!!
Can't wait for the next update! I love this story!!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ever since I read Bared Naked I'm into kitsune folklore too!! And I loooooove the cute scene you painted with your words, the whole "Will you forgive me?! -insert Kashi sensei's hurt expression-" that part was sooooooo cute, I couldn't stop smiling!
-Damp *Can't wait for the next installment!!*
-Damp *Can't wait for the next installment!!*
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness I can't tell you how happy i am to see updates for this wonderful story. I love the lore you've added and even more so the way you've slowly shown Naruto's growth emotionally and with interpersonal relationships. I'm guessing he is going to be quite an adventure for Iruka lol. I really do love your descriptions of his fox bits as well though i find some description lacking in other characters not anything major though.
I adore this story and can hardly wait for your next update.
P.S. I know exactly how you felt about the computer issues...my laptop is pretty much dead as we speak... i sorely need a new one but $$$ is tight yeah... anyhow
best wishes
I adore this story and can hardly wait for your next update.
P.S. I know exactly how you felt about the computer issues...my laptop is pretty much dead as we speak... i sorely need a new one but $$$ is tight yeah... anyhow
best wishes
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah, Kakashi and Naruto were so cute! I like Fuzzy Brow-sensei for Gai. But what is Kakashi going to tell a mini Kiba to keep him quiet? There's no way he'll keep the secret. Ugh, I'm already dying for the next chapter!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter (7)! Naruto is sooooooo cute!!!! How old is he in this story? He is supposed to look 3-4 but all his "contemporaries" are around 8ish.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the Kakashi and Naruto moments! It is so cute~~~ Maybe you could write up a Kaka X Naru Fic next time if you're up for it that is (cause i know your hands are full with the fics you have now haha).
and gosh, Akamaru just had to jump Naruto isn't it. LOL now that Naruto had transformed into a little cute fox i can't wait to see how Kakashi is gonna do to get out of this sticky situation! Moreover what is Iruka going to say =D
and gosh, Akamaru just had to jump Naruto isn't it. LOL now that Naruto had transformed into a little cute fox i can't wait to see how Kakashi is gonna do to get out of this sticky situation! Moreover what is Iruka going to say =D
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waa!! Naruto is scared of Akamaru LOLz
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Akamaru leaped towards Naruto and then Naruto turned into his fox form? Right?
Good chapter
I like the banter between Naruto and Kakashi.
Naruto's so cute!
update!
Good chapter
I like the banter between Naruto and Kakashi.
Naruto's so cute!
update!
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so cute! I love little Naruto and Guardian Riuka-sensei. I look forward to chapter 7 and hope you will update more frequently. Love this story so much. Regards!