rate_review Reviews

It was very satisfying and very cute. ^_^ I hope Kakashi makes an appearance. I love the little rivalry you have going between the "Kit" and "Cyclops".
sincerely,
jazzy

please give us more of this story. it's so good!!!

This was a great chapter. It was nice and long and it more than made up for the long wait. I can't wait till the next chapter. Naruto is so cute in your story

This story is too adorable for words. TOO ADORABLE!!!


^^ Keep up the great work!

This chapter was more than worth the wait. Naruto is so ADORABLE! It makes you want to kidnap him. Seriously I don't know why Iruka bothers to say no to him, he should just agree and get it over with, things are more fun that way. Great chapter, loved the part where he dropped his pants in the beginning and the bath scene. Looking forward to the next one.

First order of business:

DONT LISTEN TO THOSE BASTARDS!
you're writing style is unique to you i really like it if they didn't no one was forcing them to read it. besides you should write for your enjoyment first and your the fans of your writing second. if they are neither you or one of your fans then tell them to fuck off.

secondly:

I really loved this chapter naruto was so cute with the candy incident! i can really ssee him trying to play it off and continue on his way. and i really love how naruto wanted iruka all to himself, i've been looking for a selfish naruto fic for a while i just cant find any! *weeps brokenly* anway i really enjoyed this chapter nad i'm looking forward to the next.

Third:

computers can be eevil sometimes but i wish you much success anyway.

Its me again! I apologize for this being a rather short review but I managed to squeeze reading this in before heading to work, although I think I'll be late T_T.

First off:
You are truly an amazing writer. Don't pay attention to the jealous losers who wish they had half of your talent.

Secondly, this chapter was huge! *Glomps!* It made my morning ^^.

Shikamaru's portion at the start was funny, "boys are troublesome too" hahaha. Iruka's going to have such a hard time disciplining Naruto, that I feel kind of sorry for him. The candy scene was absolutely priceless, same with Jiraiya at the bath house. Naruto seems to be adapting to people more, it was great that he actually apologized to Kurenai. Naruto's going to have a fanclub. A rather large one. Can't wait until he actually interacts with Konohamaru, since they're about the same age (or is Konohamaru older?) it should make for some interesting reading =D.

I love how descriptive your writing is. I could follow everything that was happening with pictures in my mind and little chibi Naruto with a multicolored fountain of candy pouring from him inspires me to start drawing again.

There were a couple spelling errors but I'm surprised there weren't more due to lack of spell check. Which program did you use? Notepad?

Can't wait for the next installment!

Ougon

Ok, the kid is freaking cute. Can we have more Jounin Chuunin goodness. Want backstory. Wanttt.

Iruka needs someone XB. ...Yeah, so I suck at reviewing. atleastididit.

i like your story so far but i'm wait for iruka to have a nice wet dream the will wake up poor curious naruto who will just have to find out why his ruka-pillow is making so much noise and proceed to explore only to have iruka wake up and confront naruto about his explorations and then things will get awkard and hot.

A suprisingly gentle story. From the title i sorta expected a den of smutty shouta (not that there's anything wrong with smutty shouta). But instead i find an excellent story focusing on the developing relationship between an insecure baby fox and a 'new to parenthood' teacher. It's sooooooo good! It is truly one of the best stories on this site. You are doing an excellent job ^_^