rate_review Reviews

First off, you're not a terrible writer at all. You're doing a great job. Naruto is a bundle of mischief, isn't he? Iruka is NOT going to be happy when he escapes his sitter. I can't wait to see him up against the "evil cyclops" again. That part was just right! Fan girls at the bathhouse! What a hoot!

...I love this story you have such an amazing imagination that deals with Naruto being half fox, that is so Kawii. I especally love your writing talents. I hope you continue with this story.

nice^^ Naru-chan is sooo cute.
About pairings... there are so many SasuNaru and NaruSasu out there... thus I have nothing agaist it, if this turns out something else like IruNaru or KakaNaru... later.

On a side note, I agree wholeheartedly about the return after VotE. That was just awful. "Where's Sasuke?" Tell you what, the village doesn't deserve Naruto at all. *grumbles* I couldn't stop giggling at the end of this where Naru drops his pants. I could picture my nephew (who's blond as well) doing the same thing and off goes the giggles again. I'm curious about the Arashi thing. Makes me wonder what's going on there. Great story. I love the chapter lengths.

I love this story! its so cute! I love how energetic and babbling Naruto is. He is so loveable. I would love to see more Kakashi interaction. Even Iruka giving the riot act. Kakashi was so mean to poor baby kitsune. Bad cyclops! But i love even that! I love the term cyclops. Oh man! I cannot get enough of this story. I've read it three times already and I have no doubt i will read it another time soon. Its such a perfect story to read for the Holidays. :) I can't even imagine a pairing for the kit, its seems like you're heading for Naru/Hinata which I would be fine with. but the pairing of course is up to you. Take him where he needs to go. :) I hope you update soon. Sincerely,
Jazzy

So cute

Hi.

I read your whole story through... I think this story has potential, but I am uncertain as to which couple you're actually hinting on. It seems as it may be Iruka + Naruto or Iruka + Kakashi or Kakashi + Naruto as it seems in chapter three that Kakashi is completely smitten with child Naruto. Kind of kawaii now that I think about it. Do you think you'll add some more up? Soon if possible?

I really love your fics and the way you tell a story but the thing that has me a bit confused is how is it you write your stories and post them and then of course tell what kind of reviews you will like and if you do not get them your way you will stop the stories? I mean do writers who make money do that? I would think that yes it is good to get more of a review then "Oh this is nice" or the " Update soon" and of course the "Oh I wish/hope is the paring in this story" or if you get a flame you would be upset but if someone is reading the story and enjoy it do it matter what kind of review it is? if it is an Essay type review or a review that gives you pointers on what you could do to change or fix something that is wrong.

I think that trying to dictate what kind of review and the amount you want for you to continue undermines what posting stories online is about yes everyone loves reviews but even if it is short or long does it matter as long as it's not a flame?

I mean as I said I love the stories that you have posted so far but your comments on things like reviews seems a bit shady I am sorry to say it like that but it's like "Review it the way I want or you do not get another part" as if the story is the person life, yes if people do not like what how you ask for people to review they could read another story because there are alot of other stories out there but why would you want to push people away like that who would and could be a loyal reader who would recommend your stories to others just because you did not get your way and stopped a story. when you post a fic on an online place you have to expect you will not get the reviews you like or want but you can not expect review the way or the amount you want to happen so you can continue the story that shows your not doing it for fun and enjoyment but for your ego and yes alot of others do it for ego but those are the types that start to look down on people and I hope you will not become one of those people.

I really do hope to read more from you since you make great stories that I enjoy but really do think about what I posted and think if you were a fan of a story and reviewed a story the way you felt at the moment only to find the writer complaining about what you or others wrote then demand things in the review or a review amount to continue the story how would you feel?

Thank You.
Casandra

“She… she would have told me to r… respect others probablies (properties),”

Oh my gosh, that made me laugh out loud, that was an awesome line :D

Love the story for all the reasons people have already said, (and which you're sick of hearing so I won't list them again XD) and also because you have an excellent writing style and your chapter's are so nice and long :D I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story from now on so I simply hope you don't go through with your threat and put it on hiatus.

Keep up the good work
Hugs
Dream

PS: I really want to go on about which pairing I want but I won't as it seems to bug you so, (will say that it's not Sasuke/Naruto though).

PPS: I can totally sympathise with you on getting frustrated with reviewers. On ff.net, (where I have most of my stories at the mo) I adore the people who take the time to review but when they all say the same thing or go on about pairings and wanting more "action", you can't help but want to strangle them while yelling for them to say something different for once ^_^;

shut up, People! stop making comments about sasuke or she'll stop writing! you evil people! hush hush.