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LOL, *glomps naruto* I adore ur story, this is the my first time reading it.
I so agree with u, I personally think that Sasuke doesn't deserve naruto (even if they do make a cute couple). can't wait to c what u do
UPDATE SOON ONEGAI!

Ougon no Ryu 2007-07-09 id # 3000076294
I'll try my hardest to review without expanding on how absolutely cute Naruto is!

First off, this story is VERY well written with the perfect touch of humor. The interaction between Naruto and Iruka and Naruto and the Hokage is endearing and Iruka's monologue about not being a pedophile was priceless XD. Poor "evil cyclops" Kakashi... I wonder if Naruto will ever like him, though it wouldn't surprise me if he never did because of that mean trick Kakashi played on him. Naruto flashing Chouji and Shikamaru was AWESOME!

Hahaha! FINALLY! Another person who's still a little pissed at Sasuke for Valley of the End! And I thought I was the only one anymore... I could never write a Sasu/Naru Ninja verse fic to begin with since its SO overdone and I think Sasuke's an angsty prick who wouldn't know a friend if Naruto bit his ass. What different pairings are you considering, if any?

But yeah. Enough with my ramblings! Update soon!

Ougon no Ryu

I can't seem to stop laughing. As a single parent of three I have seen many of these exact things happen. Iruka is in for the ride of a lifetime.

i want to tell you that i love your story and i can't wait to see what happens next and who calls naruto a girl next and i'm hoping to find out what the hokage told Kakashi about Naruto

Oh my god I can't believe he just exposed himself, but I see he has to pull out the "big guns" in order for people to see he's a boy.

I really do love this story. Naruto seems unnaturally wise for his age and still has that innocence. Iruka does have his hands full with that little ball of energy!! I can understand as far as your readers trying to make you write something that you don't want to. My readers want certain things to happen in my stories and I have to remind them that they are reading what I create, not what they want to happen. They should write their own story if they have so many good ideas! Anyway, I will be here when you update and happy to review anytime you ask for it!! Tootles!!

haha i could see some old lady hitting on Iruka

Though that is quite a take on how naruto got into the village - oh i hope he goes to school with the others - that would be cool ^__^

ADORABLE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. I like it a lot, very well written. And your mad about what happened at the Valley of the End? HAHAHAHAHA!!!! You just wait!

Oh i am previously one of your reviewers by the name 'dut' before.

love the chapt.. I can't believe of all things Naruto pulled down his pants to prove himself but right in public! LOL... and Kakashi is being mean , why on earth did he have to construct such a news! He's making Naruto's heart break..

one question (pls don't be mad): You mean the parings of this story has not been decided yet? haha I thought it was IrukaXNaruto from the start. LOL

and for a change i wouldn't mind a KakaXNaru too! Seing how they start of on a REALLY wrong foot, i think it'll be amusing to see how Kakashi decided to make amends for his years of nasty teasing to win Naruchan's heart for himself.

Just suggestions. But i am certainly fine with which ever parings you decide on. Its your call! (as long as naruto stays uke) *evil laugh*.

now i am off to read 'dream girl' ^-^