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for My Little Uke

by DevilnBlue

person emp78
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto dropped his pants?! Priceless! That's so funny! And Kakashi could have been a little nicer and said something like he saw Iruka flirting with a woman, making Naruto jealous. Or something like that; he didn't have to be so mean about it. Hope you update soon.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to tease you but now I'm scared to. Anyways this story is great, I love how everyone keeps calling him a girl. I wonder how long it will be before he finally wants to cut his hair. Poor Iruka, first he starts his morning with that little problem and now he has to explain to Naruto why you don't just drop your pants in public. Please update soon and don't let your reviewers get to you (unless they say positive things), we don't mean any harm.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that some reviews are being inconsiderate, but i just wanted to say that i really like thise story. Kakashi was really funny (even though he was eing cruel) and i like the whole ida of the story, i can't wait for your next update
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've done that sitting on the edge of the bed and stare off into space thing. Kinda like 'I don't wanna get up. I gotta get up. But I don't wanna get up. Do I hafta get up? Yeah, I hafta get up. But I can't get up, I can't move! Can I sleep with the alarm going off like that? Aww shit...' I'm the worst morning person in the world. Anyway, that made me laugh. Love Ya!
person qwerty
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was some A/N heh well, Naruto is sure, um, his Naruto-self. Poor Iruka...
update!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg he's adorable! I jsut wanna hug him and I wanna drop kick Kakashi right out hte hokage's window. I mean I was starting to cry when Naru-kun started crying about Iruka being hurt. Ooh he's adorable but that last paragraph before hte author's nots really cracked me up! Ooh I needed a laugh, this is really good and I most certainly love it :D
person ru
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg...I can''t believe he did that. XD
person ame
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute!!! plz update!
person bunnicle
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's a good thing i read your a/n, i was gonna ask when sasuke was gonna show up... i don't want itachi sicked on me... *shivers* that's a scary thought. a pretty thought, but scary none the less. I just love this story. I first read this story while visiting a friend out of state and when i got home i hunted it down (being unable to remember the name of the story). When i say 3 new chapters, i was all like "YAAAAAYYYY! HAPPINESS!*
person ki-ka
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please-please-please=on hands and knees= let this be one of yur stories that has an ending-pleaseeee? i've been looking though my list of fav's and so far not any have update or have finished,-no i take that back,Broken by arora is finished on 28 chappies. So far from what you wrote and what i've read, I'm in LLLOOOVVEEE and i can't wait for more. LONG LIVE THE KAWAIINESS, AMEN! ^_^