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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!lemons are sweet contrary to popular belief. very sweet...excuse, me, im dripping blood on the keyboard...i need a tissue. ttyl.
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
((("It is a good morning. but what do you say we make it a great morning teme," and he kissed Sasuke.
The Uchiha broke the kiss, "Hn, I think I'd rather have an incredible morning usuratonkachi," with that Sasuke got down to the business of making Naruto scream his name so loudly that he'd be evicted. He had to get Naruto to live with him somehow, right?)))
What an 'incredible' story. Short, Sexy, and Sweet. The only problem with it was that it ended too soon. Thanks for sharing the story with us.
The Uchiha broke the kiss, "Hn, I think I'd rather have an incredible morning usuratonkachi," with that Sasuke got down to the business of making Naruto scream his name so loudly that he'd be evicted. He had to get Naruto to live with him somehow, right?)))
What an 'incredible' story. Short, Sexy, and Sweet. The only problem with it was that it ended too soon. Thanks for sharing the story with us.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In the beginning I was a bit 'WTF?' (in a good way). But I had so much fun! Kakashi is a wonderful pervert. But I'm surprised you didn't let Sasuke's fangirls try to ravish him when they saw him in those clothes. *smile*
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You.... wow! You... damn. It was really good THANK YOU!
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Chapter 1: I can’t believe it either, Sasuke. . . . Simple plot so far, but enough. . . . “Welsh on a bet?” I’ve never heard that phrase before. . . . Ooh, “Naruto-sama,” is it? Sexy. Uh-oh, something to wear? That can’t be good. . . . Oh, that’s not bad. Could be worse, Sasuke. And you (the writer) would have to show me a picture of it for me to believe it shows more than Sai’s shirt. . . . Got that right, Naruto. . . . I take back what I said earlier, Sasuke; this is worse. . . . Oh God, what will Sakura and Kakashi say?
Chapter 2: Aw, they know? Bummer. . . . That’s the funniest description of Kakashi laughing that I’ve ever heard. ^_~ . . . Heh, “Only if you’re suicidal.” I like that one. ^^
Okay, that is so not fair. I would never do that to someone, make them pierce anything. Ooh, onyx-and-blue, pretty. Could be worse, I guess.
I guess paying for it is the least he could do. . . . Boy, that was fast. I think it would’ve been better if you’d given little minor details to their arousals. The longer it lasts, the better.
Chapter 3: Mm, seems kind of hurried to me. Sorry.
Heh. “The term is ‘gay’ and yes I am, now get out.” I like that bit. XD . . . Boy, they slept a long time, then, didn’t they? I would’ve guessed they did it in the early afternoon the day before, and now it’s the next morning? Where’s all that energy they usually have? . . . And it’s the end already?
Chapter 1: I can’t believe it either, Sasuke. . . . Simple plot so far, but enough. . . . “Welsh on a bet?” I’ve never heard that phrase before. . . . Ooh, “Naruto-sama,” is it? Sexy. Uh-oh, something to wear? That can’t be good. . . . Oh, that’s not bad. Could be worse, Sasuke. And you (the writer) would have to show me a picture of it for me to believe it shows more than Sai’s shirt. . . . Got that right, Naruto. . . . I take back what I said earlier, Sasuke; this is worse. . . . Oh God, what will Sakura and Kakashi say?
Chapter 2: Aw, they know? Bummer. . . . That’s the funniest description of Kakashi laughing that I’ve ever heard. ^_~ . . . Heh, “Only if you’re suicidal.” I like that one. ^^
Okay, that is so not fair. I would never do that to someone, make them pierce anything. Ooh, onyx-and-blue, pretty. Could be worse, I guess.
I guess paying for it is the least he could do. . . . Boy, that was fast. I think it would’ve been better if you’d given little minor details to their arousals. The longer it lasts, the better.
Chapter 3: Mm, seems kind of hurried to me. Sorry.
Heh. “The term is ‘gay’ and yes I am, now get out.” I like that bit. XD . . . Boy, they slept a long time, then, didn’t they? I would’ve guessed they did it in the early afternoon the day before, and now it’s the next morning? Where’s all that energy they usually have? . . . And it’s the end already?
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... that was awesome. =^^=
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Greatest...Yaoi...Fanfic/pairing...EVER!(in my opinion)
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was awesome!XD
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.> make one where naruto loses a bet or somthing similar that was cool
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHH!
I MUST HAVE MORE!
I CANT WAIT FOR BLACKMAIL!
I MUST HAVE MORE!
I CANT WAIT FOR BLACKMAIL!