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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! :)
I liked how the characters were developed and the descriptions just forced such a grin on my face....my cheeks hurt!!! Such a SWEET story!!!! LOVE IT!!!
SQUEEL!! Its just so ADORABLE!!!

I loved this story! I am a total naruto/sasuke fan and the summary for this didn't make it clear who the pairing was or I might have skipped it...which would have been awful! Shika is usually pretty boring in most stories but I totally loved him & Naruto in this. You wrote this in a way that made me really like them as a couple. Thanks!

I came across you story in FairyNiamh recommended reading list.I love this pairing they are so cute as a couple and really reading your work. I hope to read more of your work.:D

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I loved this story and the interaction between these two guys, Naruto was just so sweet (if a little sad) and the way Shikamaru treated him so tenderly was just wonderful, I really hope you consider revisiting this pairing in the future. Whatever you decide to write about next I can't wait because it seems whatever pairing you choose it always turns out to be a fantastic story! :)

Nooooo, this can't be the end. *TEARS* *BIG EMO TEARS*! Wow, you did a really great job wit hthis fic.

Aaaahhhh!

Sequel! You have to make a sequal.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!Your style is amazing and I just ove the characterzations in a whole! OMG!! Awesome job!!! I'm so glad you hsared this lovely story!!!

KIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

DO tell me there will be a sequel! Or I will DIE! And come back as a ghost to haunt you! --Fangirl me

BEEEYUUTIFUL End! Such an artistic finish to a great fic! LOVED IT! Perfect stop! --Author me

GAH! I'm BIPOLAR! No...Split personalities...er...cofused? Yeah! That's it! I'M CONFUSED! -trademark Gai/Lee good guy pose- Huh...wait. Why am I HAPPY about that?!

GAH! HELP ME! THEY'RE COMMING TO TAKE ME AWAY TO THE FUNNY FARM WHERE LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL ALL THE TIME AND I"LL BE HAPPY TO SEE THOSE NICE YOUNG MEN IN THIER CLEAN WHITE COATS WHEN THEY"RE COMMING TO TAKE ME AWAY HAHA!

-Faints-

I LOVE YOU!
~Lihrah

oh my god! you are the greatest. it was so fricking beautiful! this story is being written down in my green-book-of-yaoi (it really exists) with 5 stars next to it. thank you so much for sharing. i couldn't imagine a better ending for this fic and hopefully you will be inspired to write this pairing again sometime in the future or insipre someone else to give this paring a try. have a nice week and thank you again!

~Devious