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for The Rubber Band Odyssey

by antilogicgirl

person KyuubiKit
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah.... are you ever going to write more for this story? I love this pairing and adore this story as well but it doesnt feel finished to me.
person Sama
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THAT WAS SO FRIGGING AWESOME!! U MUST MUST UPDATE AGAIN SOON! I just..omg I loved it! I cannot say how much I do! I'm so sorry I didn't review before...BUT THATS IN THE PAST! Please, please update again soon? I think...I'll start to cry if you don't...sniffle...TTUL! KEEP ON WRITING!
person VRon8899
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! This is so well written, I love your how the dialogue just *flows*!! I just can't wait for the SMUT!!! hehe. AWESOME!!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish I good give you an uber detailed review like normal but too tired. Just know that I really like your story and have been following it from the start. Interresting idea, wish it wasn't ending. Sad. Please long chapter and sequal maybe, yeah? Sexy Shika. Detailed next chapter? *winkwinknudgenudge*
.....sound retarded.
~The Flame Reviews~
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He he! Please tell me there is more! me wants more! hehe. PA.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! that chapter rocked my socks! the part with lee and sakura was too funny and the scene with shika and naru... *fangirl squeal* i heart this fic so much. i cant wait to read the next chapter where we are going get to the SMUT! see you next time.
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWWW!!! CUTE CUTE CUTE! HAAHAH AND GO LEE! (whistles)
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's beautiful. *sobs* Please show us happyness in their lives. *sniffle*
person Lici
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE! finish this soon! I wanna another chapter or two....Cause day be soooo cuuuuute!

Ja ne!
person mary
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.....a very well written story.......and it has just one more chappie? *pouts* but oh well. life goes on.