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for The Rubber Band Odyssey

by antilogicgirl

schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was too funny. the way ino sucks naru in and then gets the tables turned on her. i cant wait to see this plan in action. so this is gonna be narushikanaru? *jumps up and down* please note that i'll love you forever if it is. that's my 3rd fave pairing (with gaanarugaa my first and sasunarusasu my second) and it doesn't get enough love at all on this site. but even if i'm wrong, i'm looking foward to seeing how this ends. so until next time, ja.
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it!!! please update soon!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this ShikaNaru? Either way this story rocks. I've been reading it, but I really suck at remembering to review. Or I'm too lazy, whatever. I still love it.
person lo
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a nicely written prologue. Just well written and thought out. Nice job.
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sounds very interesting. i look foward to seeing more.
person Houseki
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Because this fic rocks, I have to review here too! The pro was quite hilarious. Poor Shika having a mom who can't cook for shit. The part him taking the food to Akamaru was cute. Kiba's comments were great. "dog treats". Naughty naughty Shika! Any respectable woman would definitely "get him back" in a much harsher way! hehe So looking forward to reading more ^__~ Love you love you love you! for writing this one! Post 'em quick!!

*hugs*
person Anise
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way you described Ino slapping Shikamaru, I also like that we're getting to see a little interaction between this team you really don't see it very often (well at least I haven't). It's such a great start to the story, you're a very descriptive writer and I look forward to seeing where you go with the rest of it :)